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Re: The Namesake Tree In Nutana Park
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Jan 20, 2021
HIYO! This is Hailey's review for an Amazing work! I love this. The way you made the first paragraph Italic made it stick out a lot. When you wrote "You ... -
Re: The Namesake Tree In Nutana Park
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Jan 20, 2021
HIYO! This is Hailey's review for an Amazing work! I love this. The way you made the first paragraph Italic made it stick out a lot. When you wrote "You ... -
Re: Time Played a Trick On My Good Friend William
Hiyo! this is a review for you amazing work! This is really well written and flows nicely. Its unique and Holds together well. Its worded well and I love that ...
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Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 5]
hiyo! Here's a nice review. Its not gonna tell you what's wrong with this. I don't do that. This is super good. I read it A few time actually. Its ...
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Re: moonlit car session
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Jan 15, 2021
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Re: belt and pants
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Jan 14, 2021
Hiyo! its Hailey! And heres my Amazing review for an Amazing Post. This is super good. I love that its in the View point of the pants. I love this ... -
Re: Ash
Ok hi sorry. I love you poem.. its so heartfelt and relatable. I love the way you put the words so effortlessly with each other (probably with effort). It amazes ...
Dec 7, 2020 -
Re: Ash
oops next ones the review
Dec 7, 2020 -
Re: First bit of my book. Thoughts?
hey. this is great. i think the chareters are well rounded. i thought it was nice alex shared her b-day with her mom to. its really nice over all. sorry ...
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Re: Peeking in
hello... I'm just here. I think ill review your poem with a positive Review! The way you use your words shows that there's true feeling behind what your writing and ...
Oct 9, 2020 -
Re: Surviving the zombie apocalypse as a highschooler Day #1
thank you for your review. I hope you will continue to critique my work as i continue because this was alot of help
Oct 9, 2020 -
Re: Surviving the zombie apocalypse as a highschooler Day #1
thank you so much for reviewing my work it helped me a lot in relising the few things I didn't even notice. And wow ur hook was amazing
Oct 9, 2020 -
Re: impossible
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! man I wish I could write lyrics like this! its so gooood. I know I'm not really critiquing but its so good.
Sep 29, 2020 -
Re: Please help me with my story descriptions
These are all pretty good. I think mia and Kyles could use alittle work. How about a little teaser to the reader about how mia reacts to meeting kyle or ...
Sep 29, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 1: Sunrise and Snowfall (pt.1)
This is good.. wow
Sep 29, 2020