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haha, as interesting and humorous as this is, I am going to be a buzz kill. Its quite far from an effective poem. Firstly, it is not an ode. An ...

Your argument needs work. However well intentioned this essay may be, there is a bias and opinionated air about it. I felt as though I was being attacked as I ...

Not so sure how to Review such a piece. Grammatically, its flawless. so I will keep it short and sweet. Firstly, the content is something that I definitely related to. ...

Good day! Im going to review this piece of yours as best I can. Firstly, the scenes are quite vivid. Although the sentence structure and vocabulary could be more colourful ...

Really interesting focal point. I feel like it may have been hurriedly written, although that technique can lead to some fine poetical pieces. Try to explore your vocabulary a bit ...

This is an awesome topic and fills me with inspiration. Grammatically, this piece seems flawless. I generally say that there is always room for improvement, but in this case, im ...

Very touching Meet cute. The characters seem well developed and personalised allowing the reader to follow without too much introspection. Which is very important. there are quite a few grammatical ...

Overall, I think its pretty good. The setting is beautifully described and the characters appearances are vivid. Your vocab also adds considerably to the vibe of the scene. However, I ...

Beautiful. Im very fond of your style and the light in which you portray this tragic story. The series of events that build up feeling and evoke mild emotions culminate ...

Overall, I find it to be a well maintained and simple dialogue. it is easy for the reader to grasp without the need any introspection which is no mean feat. ...

Great Piece. Awesome character development and introduction, the personalities of Charlie and Jerry are Really brought to life by your dialog and vocab. I'd say that the characters' vivid personalitie