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Re: A Night Before the Exam...
Guardian here! This is, quite frankly, clever poetry. Every high schooler and college student can directly relate to this. That is a sign of successful poetry; so hats off to ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: Search For The Diamond Of The Deep book 1 Chapter 3
Hello, Guardian here! This seems like an excellent tale, and I am here to provide some assistance and insight! When I began reading, I noticed some minor errors that could ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 25
First of all, very well written! You certainly have a knack for this sort of stuff, and you should be proud! I love the dialogue, as it flows very smoothly. ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: Ivy (Part 3/3)
Guardian here-- Wow. This was... Dark. I mean, very dark. I haven't read the first two parts, but I'm extremely tempted to now. The imagery in this was amazing. Incredibly ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: i tried you on, but you didn't fit.
Hiya! Guardian here! Just to start things off, I want to say that poetry can literally be ANYTHING. I'm not joking. I have studied poetry for quite some time now, ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Looka Da Flicka of My Pearls
Guardian speaking-- I just want to start off by saying that this is the most abstract piece of writing that I have ever read or reviewed. I'll try my best ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Have you ever?
Hi! Guardian here! I love this! Absolutely love it! From my education in poetry, a poem can literally be anything... There are no boundaries when writing a poem. (As far ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Protectors of Gantaro
Hiya! Guardian speaking! First off, this is a great mix of fantasy and adventure. I love the ideas you have going on over here: A character with a split race, ...
May 28, 2015 -
Re: A Royal Reborn: Prologue
Hi! Guardian here! I want to just say that I absolutely LOVE the character development here! The whole concept of a boy with no father embarking on a journey is ...
May 27, 2015 -
Re: Color Photographs, Chapter Three
Guardian here! WOW! Just: WOW! I haven't read the first two chapters, but I will now! This writing is truly incredible. I am at a loss of words right now. ...
May 27, 2015 -
Re: Beyond the Horizon
Hi! Guardian here! You reviewed MY work earlier, and now, I'm just returning the favor... :) So, first off... The format of the story was very... Awkward. I don't know ...
May 27, 2015 -
Re: The Mystery Of The Dog Ghost
Hi Eros! Guardian here! I just wanted (before I started) to say that it was nice to have a change of writing styles. I've been coming across a lot of ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Prologue and Chapter 1
Hey! Guardian here! Sorry if I say anything incorrect, or somehow my reviewing skills are flawed... I'm really new to this. I already read your prologue, and I absolutely loved ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Epilogue
Guardian here! Incredible! Truly, truly incredible! I haven't seen imagery such as this on YWS before. I loved the character introduction that you've created! One major thing I'd like to ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Old Lives - Chapter 1
Hi! Guardian here! This is my first day on YWS, and this is officially my first review. Let's just hope I don't mess up... So, something that I definitely loved ...
May 25, 2015
