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  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: A Night Before the Exam...

    Guardian here! This is, quite frankly, clever poetry. Every high schooler and college student can directly relate to this. That is a sign of successful poetry; so hats off to ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: Search For The Diamond Of The Deep book 1 Chapter 3

    Hello, Guardian here! This seems like an excellent tale, and I am here to provide some assistance and insight! When I began reading, I noticed some minor errors that could ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 25

    First of all, very well written! You certainly have a knack for this sort of stuff, and you should be proud! I love the dialogue, as it flows very smoothly. ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Horror Re: Ivy (Part 3/3)

    Guardian here-- Wow. This was... Dark. I mean, very dark. I haven't read the first two parts, but I'm extremely tempted to now. The imagery in this was amazing. Incredibly ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: i tried you on, but you didn't fit.

    Hiya! Guardian here! Just to start things off, I want to say that poetry can literally be ANYTHING. I'm not joking. I have studied poetry for quite some time now, ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Looka Da Flicka of My Pearls

    Guardian speaking-- I just want to start off by saying that this is the most abstract piece of writing that I have ever read or reviewed. I'll try my best ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Narrative Re: Have you ever?

    Hi! Guardian here! I love this! Absolutely love it! From my education in poetry, a poem can literally be anything... There are no boundaries when writing a poem. (As far ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Literature Re: Protectors of Gantaro

    Hiya! Guardian speaking! First off, this is a great mix of fantasy and adventure. I love the ideas you have going on over here: A character with a split race, ...

    May 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: A Royal Reborn: Prologue

    Hi! Guardian here! I want to just say that I absolutely LOVE the character development here! The whole concept of a boy with no father embarking on a journey is ...

    May 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Color Photographs, Chapter Three

    Guardian here! WOW! Just: WOW! I haven't read the first two chapters, but I will now! This writing is truly incredible. I am at a loss of words right now. ...

    May 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Beyond the Horizon

    Hi! Guardian here! You reviewed MY work earlier, and now, I'm just returning the favor... :) So, first off... The format of the story was very... Awkward. I don't know ...

    May 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: The Mystery Of The Dog Ghost

    Hi Eros! Guardian here! I just wanted (before I started) to say that it was nice to have a change of writing styles. I've been coming across a lot of ...

    May 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Wool of the Prince-- Prologue and Chapter 1

    Hey! Guardian here! Sorry if I say anything incorrect, or somehow my reviewing skills are flawed... I'm really new to this. I already read your prologue, and I absolutely loved ...

    May 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wool of the Prince-- Epilogue

    Guardian here! Incredible! Truly, truly incredible! I haven't seen imagery such as this on YWS before. I loved the character introduction that you've created! One major thing I'd like to ...

    May 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Old Lives - Chapter 1

    Hi! Guardian here! This is my first day on YWS, and this is officially my first review. Let's just hope I don't mess up... So, something that I definitely loved ...

    May 25, 2015


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