GrinningMan

Firstly, I must say I like this. Secondly, very well executed telling. I do have a couple nitpicks. The first one would be the lack of description on the characters ...

Interesting. Honestly, when I saw this on the front page, I was rather hesitant to click it, but my brain had to do so itself. I thank my brain for ...

Well, an interesting poem. I'm glad I found it. It feels refreshing finding this type of format being written out, a nice break to the common versions. It was a ...

Aaaand another review. I saw that someone didn't give you as good as a review (or critique) that you deserved, so to make up for that, here I am. Length ...

Alright, it's time to show people how to review... Or at least give you something that'll help out a lot. Let's get the most obvious point out of the way. ...

You cough me off on this one, I had to read it over twice to figure out what was happening. Here was I, thinking that it was going to be ...

It's a nice little poem, I like it. Messages can be given in any form, whether it's story or poem. I feel that poems get it across better because you ...

Ah... Poem's like these. You know, I like them so much. It feels nice to relax and read something like this, it puts my sense of talent into my fingertips ...

Questions Questions Questions! But where are the answers for all of them? Could life just be a game for an omnipotent fool? Or a powerful genius? An everpresent universe or ...

A perfect little poem. I happen to really like it. If it was longer it would only be infinitely all the better. I contemplate on the state of society, problems ...

Very interesting. No other short story has made me feel this way, I happened to like this more than what my friends have given me and be proud, because it ...

I have the same mind set as this character, society is overrated. But onto your short work, it was good. I feel that there could be more done and there ...

I enjoy poems like this, however this is a style I haven't quite seen before. The rhyming is different but no less is it bad, just different to my tastes. ...

I will be honest right now, I came here to review for points, but stayed for a captivating prologue. Normally this is out of my comfort zone to read, but ...