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Re: Glass girl
Hi, "GreenTuliip" here to give you a review. With a title like "Glass Girl", you have expressed the fragility of this girl very well. Within these two lines is where ...
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Re: A palette of sunset
Hiya there- "GreenTulip" here to leave you a touching review. :). I have a single word to say about this poem- amazing. Within a short amount of space you pulled ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: One Moment
This poem is very powerful. It holds strong emotions within it's words. It is a good poem, one that I think that describes how someone who cuts would feel. This ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: Revelations 22:22
Wow, is the word that I can use to describe this poem. This is amazingly well written. Good job on writing it. Emotions flood from this piece of poetry- sad, ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: It Was Decided
Hi, just "GreenTulip" here to give you a quick review. Sigh..I hate to be critical of something I read, but this is just one case I need to be. First- ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: This World We Live In
Well dang. This is very true. The world is nothing like what it was just generations ago. Technology has become to ingrained in everyday lives for us to manage without ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: Cranium Cage
One word- Wow. This is an interesting poem. The title itself is the reason why I chose to click upon it's link. I am glad that I did. This poem ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: The real Dr. Who?
This is a poem that I will have to show two of my friends who are big fans of Dr. Who. Though I myself haven't watched the show or know ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: Proof of Thought
Wow, a long poem. This was well written, well from what parts I read. But, never fret that part- it has been a long day for me and the length ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: Lūcifer
Wow, there is a lot of stuff in the poem. This poem is well written, to be subtle first. This caught my attention- just by the title. :) . Reading ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: Arthur's Showdown
This is an interesting story. The story line is very well developed as I read through it. The flow from the present to the flashback was solid and didn't have ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: -
I have a single word to describe this- Interesting. Though it is strange in a way, it flows nicely as you further the chapter. The characters are developed, but could ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: Lucy's Cousin (title pending)
This is a very emotional piece that shows the strong ties of friendship and family. It is a good piece that shows what a friendship can mean in any form ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: Hawk's eye - Chapter One (Working title) Scrapped
I like the idea of this story. It is creative, and I love how you mention what is different about Hawk. The one thing that I love is the fact ...
Jan 13, 2014 -
Re: The Place Itself (Jerome's Collection #1)
This is a unique poem, that shows a nightmare that a child actually hides from when they hide in the closet. They fear the person or thing that will get ...
Jan 13, 2014
