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Re: Calculated Risk Ch. 1 - "Scrapes and Bruises"
Hello Tulip here to give you a review today on your chapter! Okay, first thing I want to say is that we don't see the environment that are in described ...
May 26, 2016 -
Re: Tips for Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 23: AAARRRRRGGGHHHH!
Hello, Tulip here to give you a review of your chapter! I know that I haven't read your other chapters yet but I am going to be reviewing just on ...
May 10, 2016 -
Re: The Costs of Higher Education
Hello. Tulip here to give you a review on your chapter. As some one who is attending college, I can kinda relate to this so much more. I hate the ...
May 10, 2016 -
Re: The Void - Chapter 9
Hello, Tulip here to give you a review of your chapter! Okay, so I am going to completely honest, I have not read any of your other chapters so this ...
May 10, 2016 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 26): Not Exactly a Flesh Wound
Hello, Tulip here to give you a review of your chapter that has been sitting here for like ever. I will say this, I haven't had a chance to read ...
May 10, 2016 -
Re: In the Absence of Stars - 2.2
Hello Tulip here to give you a review on your chapter. I'll be honest I haven't read any of your other chaoters, but this chapter seemed to be okay to ...
May 8, 2016 -
Re: The Farm
Hello Tulip here to give you a review on your ahort story 'The Farm'. This story is amazing, I shall say. I feel like it shouldn't have been lurking within ...
May 8, 2016 -
Re: Lies of a Forgotten Father
Hi Tulip here to give you a review on your poem! Wow! This packed an emotional tone the entire way there and by the end of it I wanted to ...
May 3, 2016 -
Re: Uprising
Hello, Tulip here to give you a review on your poem "Uprising". One thing to really say too this poem is wow. This work caused me to sit on the ...
May 2, 2016 -
Re: I Want
Hello, Tulip here to give you a review on your poem "I want". First before I start with anything else in this review, I highly suggest that you change your ...
Apr 25, 2016 -
Re: Thunder
Hello, Tulip here to give you a review on your poem. It was an interesting poem, and the only thing I have to say is that the language was different ...
Apr 6, 2016 -
Re: This Old Love Scene
Hello there! Tulip here to give you a review on your short story! So this was interesting and caught my attention. I know that it is supposed to be a ...
Apr 6, 2016 -
Re: Journey within !
Hello, Tulip here to give you a review. In this review, I'm going to take your poem and make suggestions that you don't have to take so it's going to ...
Apr 4, 2016 -
Re: An Ocean Death Would Be So Beautiful
Hello, Glauke! Tulip here to give you a review on your poem, from which the name made me want to review this. I loved the emotions that came out of ...
Apr 4, 2016 -
Re: Land of The Dying Sun 1: The Beginning of Summer
Hello! Tulip here on this review day to give you a review on your chapter! This was a different piece of work than I typically read, and I can say ...
Apr 3, 2016