GrayLady

This is incredible. I really do love it! In just this paragraph, you had me feeling what the narrator felt. I relate so much, and I know that I do ...

Hey there! This is AWESOME first poetry. I love the personification and the imagery and everything about it. It's the stuff I live for. Some pointers: "that's when the beast ...

Hiya! I'm not much of a poetry person, it doesn't come easily to me. This may sound like an incredibly weak point to make, but I love what you did ...

Well, hello. You knew this was coming, my friend. As you very well know, I'm obsessed with your writing style. It's probably my favorite thing in the world. Which may ...

Hi! Wow! Poetry. Love this. Okay, so really the only point I can make here is a little bit of grammar stuff. I'm a grammar freak. It's lame. In your ...

Hello. It would appear I'm back from the dead, so this is my first review in...seven months? Eight? We'll see how this goes. First off, I really enjoyed your concept ...

Wooow. This is good. I say this to everyone who writes poetry, but this honestly is, by all means. Being able to write poetry is not a skill you should ...

Whoa, you must have been really angry! I love the meaning behind it, because trust me, I've felt that way before. But when you said "where only the fantastic star," ...

Uhh...I'd tell you how good it is, but good doesn't really do this piece much justice, so I'll skip over that part. Really. If I tried to explain it...oh my ...

Okay, this is very, very wonderful, but there's so much missing from it, it's hard to appreciate...I felt lost, reading it, because I didn't know who was speaking when, or ...

This is good! I love how you went into such depth on the landscape bits, they're really beautiful. I'd look at your form a little bit, I feel like for ...

These are pretty. I think you should write more poetry like it, because you seem to be really good at it. The only thing I'd say is work on the ...

This is so sad, but it's so good! It's so sweet. In your writing, when you're talking about Jasmine's mother, you probably should have decided whether you wanted to say ...

This is a sweet song. I like its message, but you might want to put a little bit more into the bridge. Simply repeating "help me" doesn't seem to do ...

This is sweet...I wanted to cry when I read it! I didn't quite understand who the narrator was in the beginning, but the ending and title helped me clear that ...