Gravity

I love this poem. I LOVED it. I feel so connected to you right now. I used to cut the same way. I completely understand what you went through. I ...

I loved this poem, I thought it was fantastic and everybody and their grandmother needs to read it. The beginning descriptions of the air and just the essence of the ...

I guess this narrative poem really confused me. Why did you name this poem "In God's Time"? It seemed to me like this poem was primarily about you checking your ...

This poem was odd to me in the sense that you tried to rhyme, and the rhythm was way off. I like your concept of the safe haven, but I ...

This poem was lacking in proper rhythm and the rhyme scheme felt weird to read, but it was a very good narrative. So this man watched his wife be raped ...

I love this poem. I love the concept of "Who am I?" Like it's a riddle. This poem at first made me think you were describing Satan or possibly a ...

I really liked this story. There were just a few things I didn't like. The first was the similarity to "The Sniper" by Liam O'Flaherty. It's an extremely popular sort, ...

No. I don't want to be mean, but this isn't poetry. Well, not to me. The first letter of every line should be capitalized. You have so many spelling errors ...

The only thing I don't like is the formatting. Are there supposed to be stanzas? I loved this poem because the language is simple and easy to understand, yet you ...

I really loved this short story. You have a lot of talent. There were only a few things I didn't understand/didn't like. At first, I thought Marcus had some sick ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I loved how you managed to create a great rhythm, and while it's obvious you had a formatting problem, you made the stanzas prominent. I ...

I really liked this short story. The only thing is that the last line doesn't make any sense. There are some lines that don't make much sense to me, but ...

I'm going to be honest here, I didn't get further than the fourth paragraph. Not because it was bad, because this story actually has a lot of potential, but because ...

I really don't have a lot of bad things to say about this short story. You're right, it is a little rough around the edges. However, some basic grammar checks ...

There is literally nothing here. I'm reviewing this to get a review day thing out of the way. My fingers are flying on the keys. So I don't know what ...