Gravity

Sonnet Number 18, by William Shakespeare. I knew that off the top of my head. Ironically, I used that sonnet in a poetry anthology. I do have a few things ...

I love this. Most people don't think about the hardships our soldiers suffer under. Many of my family and friends either serve or have served, so this reaches close to ...

How do you produce so many songs so quickly? There were a ton of grammar errors, but those don't matter. I totally get this song. Usually, I find love songs ...

What I love about these lyrics is how wishful it is. It's so melancholy and sad and nostalgic. It brought tears to my eyes. I can't... I can't describe to ...

I loved this. I use Christian themes in a lot of my work as well, I thought this poem was absolutely gorgeous. However, if you've seen my reviews on YWS, ...

Okay. I have a lot to say about this. Some of it bad. Some of it good. Just to warn you; most of it is bad. So please don't take ...

While I loved this, I thought it could benefit from a few changes. For one thing, the rhythm isn't always consistent. For example. I stirred, but still you somehow failed ...

I'm loving the lyric about defying gravity (It's kinda my motto). I really liked the idea of this song, I just had a couple of nitpicks. If you had separated ...

I'm not liking this poem. It's not your fault I don't like it, I just don't. There are hings that need to be fixed. For one thing, your rhymes are ...

This is a beautiful poem. I didn't think it was upbeat or lively at all. Cyberbullying and nasty comments online are a pretty serious thing. Ordinarily, the lack of punctuation ...

I really did like this haiku. I thought it was lovely. You'd be surprised (because this is such a short poem) but I do have a few nit picks. First, ...

I like this. I thought the repetition was a great element. However, I think this poem would really benefit from some structure. It needs stanzas. This way, the stanzas will ...

Okay. So this seems more like a journal entry to me than a short story. I'm not a fan of Taylor Swift because of her newer stuff, but when she ...

I liked this poem. It seems very straightforward. As well as being straightforward, I over analyzed it. But it seems to be this simple to me. So I'm going to ...

I thought this was good. I have a few nitpicks. I don't like how you used the word "slate" in place of paper. A slate is actually what people used ...