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GrHinds09

GrHinds09

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Son of the Night - Prologue

    This was a wicked good read! I can't wait to hear more! This tension was awesome I appreciate and love how it built up. I love how we can already ...

    Jan 23, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Drip Finally Stopped

    I loved this! It felt very real and honest. It made me feel sorry for the the speaker that someone hurt and tried to change them like this They tried ...

    Jan 23, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Cyclical Hunger

    I really enjoyed the flow of this poem. The repeating stanzas add a really nice emphasis on the point. Also I enjoyed the ouroboro reference. I like that the poem ...

    Nov 15, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Blood, Lust, and Royalty Ch.1

    You told me this was a romance Alex. Just just what how whhhhhhhhhhhhhhy please no. There is no romance as far as I know from this story it's just murder. ...

    Nov 1, 2023
  • Poetry » Horror, Supernatural Re: Web of Illusions

    The emojis do show up. I never thought of this, but your right Halloween and online are very similar. We hide our true selves either for reasons of being self ...

    Oct 31, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: withyouicouldneverbealone

    This is so lovely. It's short, but conveys the speakers true, pure love so well. They find all these things they love about their special person everywhere. They relate them ...

    Oct 31, 2023
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Romance in the Veins of Noir

    I loved this story. Lottie is super cool, she's strong, independent, nonconforming, funny and just overall great! She just has really good vibes, in a mystery book heroine kinda way. ...

    Oct 28, 2023
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Class of 1985: A Halloween Tale

    WHOAH I was not expecting that twist! This was super spooky and fun great to get into a Halloween mood. The characters felt super fun and their dialogue was great ...

    Oct 26, 2023
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: The Human Way

    This is super interesting and really speaks to the human nature. We hid our true selves to make sure we fit into this preconception of perfection even though we lose ...

    Oct 24, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: A Peasant's Plea

    This was really sad and beautiful. This man has had everything taken from him. His family was hurt and starving and now he's going to die. War is terrible and ...

    Oct 24, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Mom Loved

    This was super sweet! I was a little sad and worried about the duck though. It's really good writing I felt like I could kinda feel the characters emotions and ...

    Oct 20, 2023
  • Short Story » Horror, Romantic Re: Mis ojos, mi amor

    This story was gorgeous and chilling. I wasn't expecting the ending. They must of loved them so truly if they stayed even after finding all the parts. They should've listened ...

    Oct 20, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Blazing Skies

    This story was lovely. It's interesting seeing how Blayze changes from her young self to her current ways. She seemed so gentle and happy when she was with Tal but ...

    Oct 19, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Lyrical, Romantic Re: The Other Side of the Redwood Tree - Chapter 1

    I wonder how these people ended up with such differing educations and why do they want to kill the plants? What made them believe that plants need to be destroyed? ...

    Oct 19, 2023
  • Poetry » Science, Realistic Re: the road is wet when raining

    I loved this poem. Sometimes saying the obvious is so important because it's so underlying that sometimes we forget. We can get lost in that in between, the time in ...

    Oct 19, 2023


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