GoldFlame

Hey, Flame here again! First thing I have to say: Arghhh! I wish that I could write as well as you do! But since you write so well, I have ...

Flame here to review! You got me confused, but I guess that that's the point :). Where did this Conscience come in? Has the story been told from his (or ...

Hey, Flame here! Welcome to YWS! Finally, I can credit someone for having perfect grammar! No spelling errors, no misused semicolons, and commas in compound and complex sentences. Your writing ...

Hey, Flame here to review! I have to say, this was beautifully fast-paced :D. And you've mastered description and word choice, and grammar for the most part. Just check that ...

Hey, Flame here to review! So, once again, fabulous work. I have to admit, the piece was much easier to read without the run-on sentences, and the shortened descriptions helped ...

Hey, Flame here! Again, I laughed to death reading Donna's thought comments. New favorite line of the day: "If all things horrible came from Evil, elevator tunes are probably one ...

Hey, Flame here! Sorry that I couldn't get around to reviewing your epic chapter earlier... Greek gods! I love how you stressed sibling rivalry between Artemis and Apollo. The humor ...

Hey, Flame here! First of all, AMAZING descriptions. Not too elaborate, not too simple, not too choppy. Your beginning got me hooked; I could tell right off the bat that ...

Hey, Flame here for a review! I hope not to be too critical. Your piece definitely has some potential :D: creative plot, great development of characters, and decent grammar! Overall, ...

Hey, Flame here again! I'm so curious to see where this is going! All mythological gods packed into one fiction novel? Dream come true!!!! However, if I was hearing voices ...

Hey, Flame here to review! First off, welcome to YWS! I hope that you really enjoy it here. :D Don't get me wrong, I loved your piece; it was sweet ...

Hey, Flame here with some quick thoughts! First off, welcome to YWS! I really hope that you'll enjoy it here. So...I'm sorry that I can't give much of a review. ...

Hey, Flame here! Please don't take any of the comments below the wrong way; understand that I really loved your work, and I definitely see some potential in it! No ...

Flame here, with some quick thoughts! Sorry for writing so little; there's not much to say about your poem! It was sweet and true (although, to be honest, I don't ...

Flame here, as promised! I am awed. This is sends a powerful message, with the repetition of "Know that I'll be there." It's hard not to repeat what the reviewer ...