GlitterGabbi

Gabbi gonna review now! Hehehe~ Hehehehehehe~ Just 'coz I wanna~ I really thought this was a really scary story. I think I'm gonna have nightmares. First, let's talk about all ...

This is..... AMAZING! *0* I really liked how you explained why everything that kills you makes you feel alive. It's really awesome! How you write it and stuff is epic! ...

I really like this story :D I really loved the idea of it. How Lucy was dreaming of Simon when she was in a hospital because she really loved him. ...

Hi! Gabbi here to review :D First, you forgot to put commas in. Without commas, it sounds kinda weird. I'll give you some examples. (Paragraph 2) "He pops the trunk ...

SparklingGabbi here! I'm going to make an epic review! I'm glad that I did not see any spelling mistakes! Great! But I did see a mistake with your dialogue. " ...

SparklingGabbi here to review! Firstly, I like to point out your spelling mistake. "When she reached the too of the stairs" Is 'too' meant to be 'top'? I would also ...

GUESS WHO'S HERE TO REVIEW!!! COME ON!!! GUESS!!! XD Ok, its me, you guessed right. (Did you?) A 'nother review from me to a writer! Hehehehe >:) First things first, ...

Nice nice! I like it! Like everyone said....... Hhehehehe, good grammar and no misspellings! CONGRATS!!!! :D *Puts an A+ for grammar* it was great to see none of those, made ...

The plot so far is very interesting. I would like to keep reading this! Keep working on it! I liked to intro, Virginia looking at someone's fat belly. Very funny. ...

This...was.... amazing..... The wording was great. I loved how you worded everything! The introduction was excellent. Loved it, don't think you need to change anything there. The ending..... Was reall

I was waiting for review day to happen so that I can review this! So. Your story. I really like it. But you forgot to add: characters, plot, theme, setting ...

Yay! I enjoyed reading it! I don't really know how to write a good review since this is my second one that I am writing, but I'll try my best! ...

HEY! It's Gabbi. ^-^ I don't really know what to write, so I'll just follow common sense and my instincts. Likes: I really liked you story! It was nice. I ...