GingerLizzy

Wow, this was pretty original actually and I really liked it! It kind of reminded me of the Hungry Caterpillar, which is one of those books that you never forget, ...

Ha, this is cute. I liked your rhyming scheme and it had a nice playful flow to it. I could imagine this being in a Valentine's Day card though, because ...

This was actually super! Oh my, I loved it. At first, I was a bit iffy about it because I thought that you're flow was a bit off, but once ...

Whoa, I think you did get confused, although I'm not sure you did. You need to touch up on your grammar and stuff like capitals and stuff. This makes your ...

I can't really say much about this, because I'm a little stumped, to be honest. I liked the imagery that you used and think that the line; "The roses that ...

You have a talent for writing some quirky poetry. I liked this but felt that the low became rushed and all a bit of a jumble. This might have just ...

Hm.. It was nice to begin with but you kind of got carried away with the amount of information that you fed the reader. Instead of making them feel as ...

Hm.. I liked this but the structure/flow of it put me off a little. It was a wonderful story behind it, and I'm sure a lot of people know how ...

This was actually quite good and you had a funky little rhyming scheme, although I find the scheme maybe a little too "happy" for the story behind the poem. You ...

It was indeed, cute, but not very original. I loved your third stanza, I thought it was very well written with an almost childlike defiance of a little gremlin thing. ...

Hm, not so sure what to make of this if I'm honest.. I liked it, and I didn't. The idea was probably okay, but I felt that it wasn't really ...

This is actually a well written piece. I'm a little iffy about the lack of punctuation, not even the odd comma or full stop. Perhaps you could add some and ...

I found this hard going to be honest. Your flow was a little jumpy in places and you jam packed some lines to contain a lot of complex similie combinations. ...

This was good because of the passion that you infused into it. But, I'm a little iffy about the choice of words in some parts. Such as, you tend to ...

Oh, I've just read your prologe and stuff. I'm not normally browsing this part of the site, so excuse me if this review is completely pointless. I like the idea ...