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Re: The USA Abattoir : Chapter Two
Hello darling! We meet again, mephistophelesangel! :D There are some small errors like: "He tries to calm down his breathings and think clearly." - Breathing is singular. "Then his jumbled ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Prologue of The USA Abattoir
Hi there mephistophelesangel! :D We meet again. :3 So on with the review: Looks like SparkToFlame here pointed out all the mistakes so all I'm left with is the praises. ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Soul's Decay : Chapter One
Hey there mephistophelesangel! :D I really liked the piece. First of all, great story. Your vocabulary is amazing. Your writings skills are well. All in all it was remarkable. I ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: You Accidentally Left Your Wedding Ring
Hey there Kevikur! :D I love your story! It was absolutely amazing! I love your idea. :) Michael's a drunkard with whom Celia had to put up with everyday. She ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: The Chasers - Chapter 2
Hey there again RoachRedford! :D First things first, I noticed that you posted chapter two right after the prologue, meaning that chapter one is the prologue, right? But prologue is ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: The Chasers - Prologue
Hey there RoachRedford! :D OH MY GOD. THIS IS WHAT I CALL THRILLER/MYSTERY NOVELS. WOW. LIKE WOW. You're writing style is VERY different from the ones I have reviewed around ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Independent-Chapter 2
Hey there alliesantana11! :D I like this chapter too. :) I won't talk about the punctuation errors since I reviewed about that in the last chapter. However I would like ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Independent-Chapter 1
Hey there alliesantana11! :D So let's get on with the review! First of all, not a great use of punctuation. Here are some sentences which I corrected: He is spoiled ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Death Won't Set You Free
Hey there again cupcakenx! :D Do I need to say that I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE you? And you know why? BECAUSE YOU'RE SO AMAZING! HOW YOU ADVISE PEOPLE. HOW YOU BRING SUCH ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: Paper Girl
Hey there again, fortis! OMG, I absolutely love your poems! Hey, hey, I LOVE THIS.
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: Ana's The Enemy
Hey there cupcakenx! :D Hey, I love the theme of your story. Anorexia is a serious issue and I'm glad that you wrote about it. I loved your story. I ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: Zebra Stripes
Hey there fortis! :D It took me a while to figure it out (I know I'm slow :p ) but I think you are talking about scars. That you are ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: The Poem I Couldn't Write
Hey there 0o0Redrum0o0! :) First of all, I like the irony. xD And of course, I absolutely love the poem! I love how you described everything and the rhythm was ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: The Feeling
Hey there Emotion1405! :3 Your name says all about your poetry. x'D Anyway, on with the review... Hey that's one amazing poem! And contrary to what AlfonsoFernandez says, I actually ...
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: Shooting Star
Hey there SunsetSprite! :3 First of all, I absolutely love your story! :D At first I was quite confused about what was going on :/ But I slowly caught the ...
Dec 7, 2013