The Chasers - Chapter 2

by RoachRedford!

Published December 19, 2013

16+ Violence Mature Content

In Chasers

Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for violence and mature content.

The previous post was titled as the prologue but I'm now going to consider that the first chapter. I would recommend reading it but to be honest the action picks up early enough here that you should be able to get the jist. Hopefully I'll have an action scene for you soon, but I'm really enjoying setting up the plot at this point. Enjoy and please review!

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CHAPTER II

“I don’t even know this guy!” screamed Daphne, her peroxide blonde hair now scooped up in a tight bun, “I have seriously never seen ‘im before in my life.”

She was wrapped in a bathrobe from the hotel now that most of the blood had been scrubbed from her skin. She was young but thankfully of legal age and seemed barely phased by the fact she had just been covered in brain matter from her most recent client.

“We know, we know,” said Cassie, trying to control Daphne’s frantic pacing. Cassie was only 28, a young legal aide before joining Chase after he had assisted her boss in a messy gambling debt gone wrong. Her eyes were a deep and mysterious brown and her delicate face was framed by hazelnut hair in straight and flawless bangs.

“Daphne, you need to tell me what happened,” pleaded Cassie, pushing a seat towards the young prostitute and motioning for her to sit.

“He picked me up just near the airport,” she began, burying her face into her fake tanned hands and long acrylic nails, “He picked me up in his Merc and asked if I’d ever been to the Royale or sommin’. I said no and he said it was heaps pretty and stuff and like told me he was well rich.”

Cassie held up a hand and raised her eyebrows, “The shooting. Tell us about the shooting Daphne.”

“Oh right, yeah. Well I was performing my services as I do right, and then I hear the door open but didn’t think any’fing of it or nuffin’, but then I see the gun and then there was a sound that sounded like a snap and then his head was just everywhere, and the guy came over and shot him more and then he left. He didn’t even check me out or nuffin’.”

“The shooter,” said Chase from across the room, looking out onto the street for anyone watching the hotel, “What did you manage to see of him, what was he wearing, what was the gun like?”

“He was in a suit, but he wore a mask like he was skiing. The gun… The gun I dunno, sorry mista, but he shot it with one hand.”

“Rules out the wife,” said Link from the hallway, “Residue on the wall here means the gun was fire from here. No way is she hitting him in the temple with a one handed shot from this distance.”

Chase moved around the room, the pistol had to have been a small caliber, none of the rounds had gone through Alex Moore, and it had to have been silenced otherwise someone would have heard the shots.

“Why were you handcuffed and gagged?” asked Chase.

“I do whatever the client asks. He was paying double so I didn’t mind.”

“Do you need to be compensated further?”

Daphne was startled; she panicked as she tried to think of a figure that was both worth her silence and not too big to scare away these intimidating suits.

“I want a million otherwise I go to the news,” she said, eyeing off Caroline Moore who was in the corner in tears.

“You get 250,000 and we don’t destroy you in court.”

“Yeah deal.”

As Daphne left Link showed in Randall and Bull, two more of Chase’s field guys who were experts at clean ups. They began to remove the evidence of Alex Moore’s murder. Cassie was taken in convincing Caroline why it was a good idea to give a quarter of a million dollars to a London prostitute.

The banking information that they had found definitely suggested a more sinister motive than a woman scorned but Alex Moore must have seriously pissed off whomever he was involved with if he had been so publicly executed.

“Mrs. Moore, how much longer is this room booked for?” asked Chase, moving away from the window and dialing numbers on his phone.

“A-a, it’s booked for a week, until the end of the conference.”

“Good, we work from here. Caroline you stay with us for now; Cassie will take you out tonight to buy anything you need. Link, once Randall and Bull are done find a way to get everyone else here,” he raised the phone to his ear, “It’s Chase. I need you all in London.”

***

Barely 24 hours after Alex Moore’s heart had stopped beating, Ryan Chase had turned Room 701 into his own little command center. Link had four computer screens lighting up the room from the windows and was typing feverishly on a roll out keyboard. Randall and Bull were busying cleaning and loading pistols that they hopefully wouldn’t need during this visit in London while Cassie went through emails, text messages and memos pulled from Alex Moore’s phone with her team.

Chase’s team had seven members total. There were Chase’s hard fixers, Link, Randall, Bull and himself as well as the soft fixers Tim and Kelly led by Cassie. Between them, they had helped clients from all around the world, from politicians at the wrong end of slander campaigns to high-profile sport stars caught with a little too much magic dust on their upper lip.

They had become renowned for solving problems, for putting to bed those issues that end careers and destroy marriages. Chase was very good at what he did and very rarely did he fail. He’d been in trouble before while working and handled himself just as professionally when under fire. Anyone who contacted him knew his team as the Chasers. They didn’t just make the problem go away, they chased it until it was gone.

Caroline had calmed down and was experiencing therapy at the hands of reality TV. She hadn’t said a word since she had wired what was pocket change to her an unimaginable fortune to Daphne. She was still processing everything that had happened.

“I’ve got something here, maybe,” said Kelly who was their business advisor. She knew how to set up deals, how to win over billionaires and enthuse entrepreneurs. She could sit you down for half an hour and convince you it was in your best interest to swap your first-born son for half a packet of gum.

“He was a good businessman,” she said, “He was keeping track of his competitors through a PI. He’d found out that SwifTEL CEO James Chinner was meeting with a contact that Mr. Moore had met with three times before in the last six weeks.”

“Who’s the contact?” asked Chase, sitting down at the round table that was now drowned in paper and coffee mugs.

“Not sure. He doesn’t use any names in any calendars for those meetings,” said Cassie, “They’re linked to the emails that he receives from dynamic email addresses. All we know is that this PI must had recognized Moore’s contact visually.”

“Alright, Bull, you’re with me, we’re going after Chinner. If he and Moore were both wrapped up with the same anonymous contact, he could be on a hit list too. Cassie, you take Link and find that PI. See what he knows. Call me if any of you find anything else in the mean time.

“Let’s go.”

Comments & reviews · 5

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Dreamy
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Dreamy wrote a review Review · Dec 29, 2013

Wow, now it all make sense. Man, you are good. This is a fast moving story like a pacer, and now I understand the title "The Chaser" ;) And let me point out few that needs a look,

gone wrong


that went wrong

Randall and Bull were busying cleaning a


busy

All we know is that this PI must had recognized Moore’s contact visually.”


have

Good job!

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GigiHarris
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GigiHarris wrote a review Review · Dec 29, 2013

Hey there again RoachRedford! :D

First things first, I noticed that you posted chapter two right after the prologue, meaning that chapter one is the prologue, right? But prologue is an introductory event in a novel or play. The novel progresses based on the prologue.
The event in the previous chapter is considered to be a prologue because the story starts from the incident there aka the murder of Mr. Moore, the lady 'friend' and the emails.
So I don't think you need to rewrite but what you could do is change the title of Chapter Two to Chapter One and the rest of the chapters accordingly.

I think that this is a really great chapter. I really like the story. First of all I just absolutely like Action/Thriller/Mystery/Crime. I love those genres and your novel falls into all of them.

The dialogues of the characters are appropriate for what they are. Everything's as it should be. The prostitute's like how a prostitute should be. The dialogues are perfect.
Mrs. Moore is the image of a wealthy woman who could pay any price not to be defamed.
The detectives are... amazing.

By the way, I like the name, "the Chasers". :)

I wouldn't be surprised if you turned out to be a professional writer. You write so well! Everything is perfect!
You should definitely put this up on Wattpad if you want a bigger audience!

I like where the story is going and I am really looking forward to the rest of the chapters! :)

Keep writing,

~Gigi

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Kevikur
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Kevikur wrote a review Review · Dec 29, 2013

Another excellent chapter. I love to read detective novels. I think that genre is one of the hardest to write because you need to know enough about the law to make it real, know how detective investigations work, and how to keep the action rolling. Detectives are a leading force in these kinds of novels, and hopefully the detectives in this story are able to deliver-- and I honestly have no doubt that they will. You write professionally.

The dialogue of Daphne seemed realistic, a stereotypical prostitute. I don't have much to critique on the story itself other than a few cases of missing punctuation. Some instances there should be commas where there's pauses in dialogue. I'll point a couple out.


“He picked me up in his Merc and asked if I’d ever been to the Royale or sommin’. I said no and he said it was heaps pretty and stuff and like told me he was well rich.”
Reading it, I can imagine her putting emphasis on like and pausing to say "well, rich". Correct: "...I said no and he said it was heaps pretty and stuff and, like, told me he was, well, rich."

“The shooting. Tell us about the shooting Daphne.”
There should be a comma before Daphne.

“I have seriously never seen ‘im before in my life.”
I usually see 'im written as 'em, but I could be wrong.

I thought the description of Daphne's hair was perfect. There's no better way to make someone cringe then to read "peroxide blonde hair".

Another great chapter! I can see you writing a professional novel one day, one where I can buy in hardcover. Keep up the amazing work.

-Kev

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Cherish4118 commented Comment · Dec 29, 2013

Bull decides to go them to find Chinner.

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Bugslake
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Bugslake commented Comment · Dec 19, 2013

This is really a really good first chapter. I'm so glad that you have decided to make another piece of this story. This is just amazing.

I've always loved detective stories and when they solves. I really love when the actual moment when they find out who it is and the killer ends up being the person least expected.

You are a really good writer and I think that you should keep going with this. I really want to see how this ends.



Life is like an onion. You peel it off one layer at a time, and sometimes you weep.
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