GeeLyria

Hi Mac. I'm here as requested. I can see your changes improved your story greatly. It seems more professional and more touching. I actually have nothing to critique this time. ...

Hi there, DiannePan. I've been looking at your poem a bit, and I know that you have talent; it flows well and the topic you're bringing us is great and ...

Hi there, snickerdooly. Very, very neat work. I love it. You managed to make it interesting and it flows pretty well. Your imperative sentences make this beautiful; you used all ...

Hi there, FreshMeat. Wow. This is really good for your first time. You're bringing us a nice topic and it flows well. Though, I'd tell you to work on how ...

Hi there TheGuiltyOne. I like this a lot. You managed to word your poem in a dramatic way and that counts. :) It flows, it's creative and catchy. Though, I'd ...

Hi BadNarrator. Lol. Your nickname doesn't fit you at all. Bahahah... :) Okay, talking 'bout your writing, I like it. Though, I really dislike the fact that you cut some ...

Bahaha... Hi there StoryWeaver. As always, this is beautiful. You were creative, you use good wording, and even though I don't believe in such a things as horoscope, you're such ...

Oh, my God, Katherine. I've missed you so much. I'm Solvalery... remember me? xD Let's get to review. :D There's a mistake in the second line, you should say: "while ...

Ohhai there, AylaStarr. Nice poem you've got here. I find it interesting and it flows pretty well. Though, it doesn't have a pattern, and I find that rather... I mean... ...

Hi there, SilentRain. I believe this is a lovely poem. You're bringing us a good topic, your poem flows nicely and I think you chose your words carefully. Though, I ...

Hi there, BrokenSkye. Lovely poem. I love it. And it's a great talent you've got if you wrote this in ten minutes. xD I love the italics, I guess you ...

Hi there Soul! 8D Okay, I'm going to try to give you a good review here. xD In the first stanza you forgot an apostrophe. And I think there's a ...

Hi there, Zaid. Again, you write lovely poems, Zaid. But I'm not sure if I've told you... I think they'd be more appreciated by the readers if you divide them ...

Ohhai there, undeadbunnie! Wow. I like this. I don't usually like this kind of songs, cause I'm one happy hippie hyper bunny, xD *looks at her avvie* but I can't ...

Hi there, Lornydoo! I'm going to try to give you a good review, one that makes sense. xD Okay, in the first stanza: I feel like you could've give us ...