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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sonnet!

    Why, fancy seeing a sonnet here! I must review! I love sonnets, and traditional Victorian English (commonly know as Shakespearean English). I want to put it out there! A sonnet ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Humor, Satire Re: X (Black Comedy)

    Ohhhh wow! The ending of this story. Just wow! I honestly was not expecting the bottle of liquid ecstasy to turn into a bottle of LAX. When the seemingly omniscient ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Film, Review Re: Zero Dark Thirty

    Hey there! Hightop here to review the review. I have not seen Zero Dark Thirty, so I'm going to focus on how well you stuck to review format, and the ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Kicking the habit

    Hey there! Hightop here for your third review day review! I loved the raw emotion in this poem. You seem almost angry at yourself for even thinking of reverting back ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mother's Masterpiece

    What up Manisha? You were doing such a great job reviewing that I though I'd drop by your portfolio, and lucky me I found one with NO reviews yet! On ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Just One Question

    Hello there! Review day review :D Guess what was spot on? Your capitalization and punctuation. So many people disregard capitalization and punctuation on stylistic grounds, so I'm glad you included ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Vowing After Death

    Hey! Hightop here with a review day review! So I'm not a huge fan of rhyming poetry, but I think you did a good job here. It flowed nicely and ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: Purple Lava Lamp

    Hey! Review day review :D I liked your poem the subject of children being amazed with the simplest things is such and intresting subject to explore! Now you used the ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: I Miss Living in Obscurity

    Ohh Paragraph acrostic poetry. :D Let's get to reviewing! So on first impressions i'm guessing that you're talking to someone, from the first stanza. I originally thought you were talking ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: On Relationships with Novels

    Hey! Hightop here to review! Firstly I liked the subject of this poem. It's a very peculiar relationship we have with books, and you did a good job in conveying ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic Re: Unbroken

    WHAT? I never reviewed the prologue! We'll let's remedy that! Lovely beginning! If only I wasn't reading it backwards. Well you did a good job of introducing Bella and Dylan. ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: To Go Astray

    *Invades for review day* What up Seraph? I'm invading your portfolio for review day xD So, for starters, i'm not a HUGE fan of rhyming poetry, but I liked your ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: evolution of the fall

    Hey Persy! As you know I'm a huge fan of your work! So i'm happy to review! Now what I notice in this poem is the theme of losing oneself. ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Dogs on a high hill

    Hey there :D review day review :D Now first thing. I love the work of Dickinson. I don't think there is a poem called 'Hope', maybe 'Hope is a thing ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Brain Tumor

    Hey Yubbies :D I thought I'd come review. This is a very powerful piece. Is it Prose? I think so. Anyway. This is the kind of poetry I love to ...

    Aug 25, 2013


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