Hey! Hightop here to review!
Firstly I liked the subject of this poem. It's a very peculiar relationship we have with books, and you did a good job in conveying that especially in the last two stanzas. Your word choice was good and varied. Your structure, grammar and spelling seemed spot on to me.
One thing I disliked was the emotions in this poem. Books can make us laugh, cry, shriek in terror and gasp in astonishment. You need to show that in a poem about our relationship with books.
Other than that, I enjoyed your poem!
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