Gadi.

So since that day is tomorrow, let's see... I am not from England, so I never really heard of that Remembrance Day up to now. Your rhymes are very fun. ...

I read the first half an hour ago, and I just read the second half. Why did I stop in the middle? Because the first half was terrible, repetitive, chant-like--worse ...

Amelia doesn't need to give some "slack"! That's the whole point of critiquing--being mean to people in order to help them. I think her suggestions are incredibly just. If she ...

Sounds like a bad LSD trip. Nice rhythm, terrible cliches. I swear I am going to find a cliche in every line here--and from now on, for every cliche I ...

Nice! This had amazing imagery and it was extremely good. I liked it. Original (to some extent) and provacotive. Some comments: ------------------------------------------------------------------------

Mmmmm..... This is really short, and you used extreme vocabulary...but nothing passes through. This has been done thousands of times, and you don't do it much better than all the ...

I liked this. Loved this, actually. Your ending is magnificent--you make the moon sound unsympathetic and mercyless. You personify an object through mere description and obvious statements--"The silve

ARGH! I WROTE SOMETHING BUT THEN MY MOUSE...GODARNIT!!! Okay, from the beginning, condensed--sorry about the bluntness (arghhh again and again and again! I hate rewriting critiques) So this wasn't too

I have to say, it's good. It's really good actually. But it has the potential to be better. The main mistakes in your poem right now are your line breaks ...

Wow! Amazing. How did you think of that? I loved it. It was intriguing, funny, satiric, and very Twilight Zone -ish. Excellent job. I skimmed the monologue part because it ...

Nice! Good, engrossing beginning. Basically, every line with a mistake I'll repeat, and then add a corrected line or commentary below it. "you gave to me" "you gave me' "The ...

Mmmm.... I have to say, this was pretty good. I loved your metaphores and your imagery, and all your connections to homely, childhood objects really made an impact on the ...

Mmm.... It was good. Not excellent. I hate siding against a poem, but this one was really too bland to be called a "great" poem, which made it boring. It's ...

I started this book several times, but I found it a bit too... well, obvious, and certainly passive and unoriginal for our times. It seemed almost cheesy. I mean, "two ...

This was very abstract and intriguing. I actually liked this poem a lot. I found that your immense imagery was not only fascinating, but it actually drew emotions out of ...