Gabriellemarice99

Thanks so much for the review. :)

If you are going to comment on my work don't just leave it blank thanks have a nice day.

I tried to separate it every four lines into stanzas but it wouldn't let me so sorry for that :(

This poem is far from boring if you lived through the stress and pain of it.This is a series of true events about standing up for myself after a 6 ...

This is a series of true events about standing up for myself after a 6 month relationship of abuse and I don't know if you have ever tried to tell ...

It's the third part of the chapeter look in my folder the lost ones this is my 3rd post in that book thanks

Thanks I'll let you know when I post some more!

well the way I'm doing it is that wasn't a chapter i have sections in chapter one told from many different characters point of view but they all kinda intertwine ...

well the way 'Im doing it is that wasn't a chapter i have sections in chapter one told from many different characters point of view but they all kinda intertwine ...

thank you so much that means alot my mom read it and was like omg i know you didint post this and i was like....... so your support is appreciated

I like it! I love your simile "It comes as naturally as the weather." Its really hard for some people to write sonnets so congratulations on that! I overall think ...

Ha this made me smile I love it! I can't really relate because in group work I'm that person that everyone else just expects to do everything but it was ...

Well, its a poem about me and my boyfriend not my mother but I get where you are coming from on that along with the flow of my wording. I ...