Fullmetal13

This was beautiful, I'm sure that a read through can fine tune the mechanical details but Jesus, I honestly wasn't expecting that last part. I mean you started it off ...

Wow! Horror and suspense was definitely the right category to put this in. I think the thing that I liked the most was the spacing at the end. Definitely gives ...

So this is really short, but I think it still says a lot. I like the confidence and the absolute nature of the speaker. It's almost like if someone put ...

I really enjoyed reading this piece. My reviews tend to be a little more scattered than a point by point analysis so bear with me. I thought that your word ...

This is really cute. I think that everyone can relate to having felt this kind of stuff for someone else before and you did a really god job of putting ...

I really like the imagery of this. It makes me think of something from LOTR or something. I think that the thing I liked the most was just how sad ...

Bruh. This was great. Your word choice was fantastic, your imagery was there...seriously, I think you nailed it. I think what you did here was beautifully nuanced and not in ...

So, I like this a lot to start off with. I'll start with the goods of this piece. Your word choice was fantastic and so was your imagery. It was ...

What can I say that hasn't already been said? First off, this is beautiful, give yourself a round of applause and a pat on the back. It's relate-able, it's raw, ...

Alrighty, I've been freestyling and rapping for a few years, mostly just drunk at parties but I also am a genuine lover of rap. I'm just giving a few quick ...

Literally my only complaint is the last sentence. Call me picky, I just don't like that kind of ending. "Miss Suzy motioned to a little rocking chair near the hearth ...

Hey there So I'm going to start by saying I liked the subject matter of the poem. It's seasonal, incredibly relate able and well worded. I enjoyed your use of ...

So, I really enjoy the concept as well as the execution of this. It kind of seems like you're going for something a little post-apocalyptic with communities built up, housing ...

I gotta say I don't think I can say anything negative (I mean it is really short.) Your word choice is fantastic. I loved that you used cerulean instead of ...

I really liked the imagery that you used I thought it was really descriptive and when I closed my eyes and thought about what I'd read it was like watching ...