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Re: I Want to Write a Book
I really like this. It comes off as a nice stream of consciousness style writing and I definitely resonate with it. Both in taking the world as a strange, fantastical ...
Thu Aug 08, 2024 11:34 am -
Re: 🖤🎪 Laughing Jack’s love for Jason 🎪🖤
Geez, this is a blast to the past. I was a huge Creepypasta kid back in the day, always love seeing new material about the stories I grew up with ...
Wed Aug 07, 2024 6:56 pm -
Re: Your Blood, My Bones (An Unfinished Snow-White remake)
This was unsettling, the attitude and coldness of the Queen was done very well and made her immediately hateable to me, but in a way I could appreciate as good ...
Thu Aug 01, 2024 9:51 am -
Re: Green Eggs and Ham
Hello! This was a nice little poem, I certainly didn't expect to read a rendition of Green Eggs and Ham this morning. I only spotted one potential grammar mistake; "I ...
Thu Aug 01, 2024 9:39 am -
Re: Struggles of Criticism.
I enjoyed reading this, it came off like a good balance between a free flowing piece of writing and a pointed write up about the topic of criticism. Side note, ...
Wed Jul 31, 2024 3:02 am -
Re: The nightmare is only a nightmare, isn’t that so?
I love the supernatural... this was MADE for me. Okay, maybe not literally, but I'm excited nonetheless to offer a review for you. Especially given your help in reviewing some ...
Wed Jul 31, 2024 2:55 am -
Re: Bermuda (poem anthology)
I love the idea of personifying nature such that it can experience and express feelings of love, it feels appropriate given the beauty of nature. With this in mind, "soak ...
Mon Jul 29, 2024 8:11 pm -
Re: A moment
Wow, what a way to start a story! I did a double take, seriously. The opening line immediately made me want to delve into this, and I'm glad I did. ...
Mon Jul 29, 2024 7:54 pm -
Re: The Adventures of Rose Hood: Chapters 67-69
Hey there. I admittedly haven't read the other parts up to this part, and I do apologize for that. With that in mind, all I can and will comment on ...
Wed Jul 24, 2024 6:54 pm -
Re: ***
It's kind of refreshing to see something like this that offers a positive message to take away. Obviously everybody wants to look good, even to a society composed mostly of ...
Mon Jan 01, 2024 6:38 pm -
Re: ****
If a tree falls and nobody is there to see it, does it make a sound? Beauty is such an impossible thing to define because it varies wildly across culture ...
Mon Dec 18, 2023 4:55 pm -
Re: Calmly, Cooly
Hello, dropping by for a review! I like the buildup of the story, I think this is well aided by each sentence beginning with the same two words. We as ...
Mon Dec 18, 2023 4:43 pm -
Re: Home of us
Needed more experience reviewing poems, thanks for posting. On the opposite side of the same coin, I need more experience reviewing poems, so take what I said with a grain ...
Thu Dec 07, 2023 8:10 pm -
Re: Adventures of the North Pole: The Missing Lists (Part 1)
See, this is how I know something is wrong with me. I write and consume mostly dark/horror stories, so when I came across this little story about an Elf, I ...
Wed Dec 06, 2023 12:02 am -
Re: No Way Out
Good evening, I hope you're having a brilliant start to your winter. Thanks for posting this short story, it's very interesting! To start, I'm not from Korea nor have I ...
Tue Dec 05, 2023 11:39 pm
