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  • Other » Other, Realistic Re: I Want to Write a Book

    I really like this. It comes off as a nice stream of consciousness style writing and I definitely resonate with it. Both in taking the world as a strange, fantastical ...

    Aug 8, 2024
  • Lyrics » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: 🖤🎪 Laughing Jack’s love for Jason 🎪🖤

    Geez, this is a blast to the past. I was a huge Creepypasta kid back in the day, always love seeing new material about the stories I grew up with ...

    Aug 7, 2024
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Horror Re: Your Blood, My Bones (An Unfinished Snow-White remake)

    This was unsettling, the attitude and coldness of the Queen was done very well and made her immediately hateable to me, but in a way I could appreciate as good ...

    Aug 1, 2024
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Green Eggs and Ham

    Hello! This was a nice little poem, I certainly didn't expect to read a rendition of Green Eggs and Ham this morning. I only spotted one potential grammar mistake; "I ...

    Aug 1, 2024
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Struggles of Criticism.

    I enjoyed reading this, it came off like a good balance between a free flowing piece of writing and a pointed write up about the topic of criticism. Side note, ...

    Jul 31, 2024
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The nightmare is only a nightmare, isn’t that so?

    I love the supernatural... this was MADE for me. Okay, maybe not literally, but I'm excited nonetheless to offer a review for you. Especially given your help in reviewing some ...

    Jul 31, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Bermuda (poem anthology)

    I love the idea of personifying nature such that it can experience and express feelings of love, it feels appropriate given the beauty of nature. With this in mind, "soak ...

    Jul 29, 2024
  • Short Story » Other, Narrative Re: A moment

    Wow, what a way to start a story! I did a double take, seriously. The opening line immediately made me want to delve into this, and I'm glad I did. ...

    Jul 29, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Adventures of Rose Hood: Chapters 67-69

    Hey there. I admittedly haven't read the other parts up to this part, and I do apologize for that. With that in mind, all I can and will comment on ...

    Jul 24, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: ***

    It's kind of refreshing to see something like this that offers a positive message to take away. Obviously everybody wants to look good, even to a society composed mostly of ...

    Jan 1, 2024
  • Poetry » Horror, Spiritual Re: ****

    If a tree falls and nobody is there to see it, does it make a sound? Beauty is such an impossible thing to define because it varies wildly across culture ...

    Dec 18, 2023
  • Poetry » Horror, Supernatural Re: Calmly, Cooly

    Hello, dropping by for a review! I like the buildup of the story, I think this is well aided by each sentence beginning with the same two words. We as ...

    Dec 18, 2023
  • Poetry » Other, Literature Re: Home of us

    Needed more experience reviewing poems, thanks for posting. On the opposite side of the same coin, I need more experience reviewing poems, so take what I said with a grain ...

    Dec 7, 2023
  • Short Story » Humor, Mystery / Suspense Re: Adventures of the North Pole: The Missing Lists (Part 1)

    See, this is how I know something is wrong with me. I write and consume mostly dark/horror stories, so when I came across this little story about an Elf, I ...

    Dec 6, 2023
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: No Way Out

    Good evening, I hope you're having a brilliant start to your winter. Thanks for posting this short story, it's very interesting! To start, I'm not from Korea nor have I ...

    Dec 5, 2023


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