FourLeafClover

Ooooooh I know some of these! "Suddenly, I'm not half the man I used to be.." This one's from "Yesterday" by The Beatles "All cruelty stems from weakness." This one's ...

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Hey there! I'm here to review your first story! (Just the first one, since I don't want to take up so much space by reviewing two stories.) I noticed some ...

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Hey there! I'm here to review your poem! until their as tight as violin's, This line threw me off a little bit, because "their" suggested that they belonged to someone. ...

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Hey there! I'm here to review your poem! Three pros: 1. This was a very unique idea, having Night sing somebody a lullaby. It immediately made me interested, which is ...

Hey there! I'm here to review your chapter! I made sure to read the other two chapters before this so that I would understand what happened, and I'm glad I ...

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Hey! I'm here to review your poem! So, first of all, this is really good! Here's how: 1. I liked how you kept using the rivalry of gold and silver ...

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