ForsakenAngel

Okay, So this is the first time I've really tried to do a non- rhyming poem, so tell me what you think. He held my heart in his hands, At ...

We pass and leave you lying, No need For rhetoric, For funeral music, For melancholy bugle calls. No need for tears now, No need for regret. We took our risk ...

The canvas blank, The lines are lost, The shapes are gone, The painter paused. - The colors are hidden  Within the mind, But will it create them Or leave them ...

I feel a throbbing under my feet, A loud, raucous beat; Under the full moon, in the eternal rain I stand, captured by an invisible chain Holding me in place ...

Platters of platinum carry spoon-fed lies. The truth like dust swept beneath a rug. To see beyond those enticing falsehoods, open your eyes and gaze upon reality. Seek, and you ...

Hey, Sakin here! OK, so these are just my little steps that I have for poems. Three steps that make the poem good to me--or something like that! I love ...

Hey, forsakin here! I loved this! I actually read it twice, just because I liked it! :D Yea! Good job, by the way! The first line caught me, and I ...

Wow, I really liked this! I'm not the best person to be taking advise from, but don't change it. I love it the way it is. Sorry this is so ...

Wow...I like it! Really I didn't think I would..don't ask why, I just had one of those feelings. But I like it! I don't review often and I'm glad I'm ...

I need you to hear I need you to see so won't you listen dear when you come home to me. My betrayal cut you in half the pain shows ...

Just a Feeling Love can be a feeling A feeling we can hate A feeling we despise A feeling we can’t trust Nothing can compare to it Not a happy ...

Wow! I loved this it's so...cute! I just love the way you put it with Girl and Boy the way you did. I enjoyed reading this very much. I know ...

To die and become an angel, Would be an incredible feat. To watch over the world from the sky, Would be unbelievably sweet. I'd write poetry with a beautiful girl, ...

If I had to say three letters, To you before I die, Then I would have to pick, First I then L then Y . They stand for how I ...

Hey, Forsakin here! I was just looking for something to review and found this! I must say, as short as it was, I didn't think I'd like it, but loved ...