ForsakenAngel

Dang woman, when I asked to review something I didn't realize you would ask me to read something this long! lol but I like it! I didn't really see anything ...

Hi, Sakin here! This is really amazing and I love the way it paints a picture in the reader's mind. In the topic, the point you are trying to get ...

Hi, Sakin here. I like this! It's childish in a way, yet mature. It's very unique. Keep writing stuff like this, it could get you somewhere, because this is cute. ...

Hi, so, one word comes to mind when I read this. Wow. This is offficially my favorite poem in the world! You're amazing! I love how you make it all ...

Hi, I'm not sure I know you, but I love how sophisticated this sounds. The last little bit of it--Hebrew?--is confusing, seeing as I don't know Hebrew :D But this ...

Hi, Sakin here. First off, Shiney1 is right on those points. Other than that, I don't see anything else wrong with this. I don't think I've read anything else of ...

Hi, Sakin here! I love this, it has something sweet about it. I'm not sure I've ever read any of your poetry before but this reminds me of something else ...

Hi, it's me again! First, I'm really starting to like you. All of your poetry has this feel to it that I can't quite put my finger on. It's unique ...

Hi, Sakin here. First of all, I'm in love with this! It shows how proud you are of your ancestors and such. There is one line, though, that I think ...

Hi, Sakin here. For one, this made me cry, just getting that out there. This is sad, but it shows your emotions about what happened to your friend. I think ...

Hi! First, this is sweet in a way--I don't know if it's just me and the wierd way I like nature and stuff or if it's really ment to be ...

Hi! First of all, I loved this, it was sweet in a freakish way. Second, try capitalizing your I's (it's my pet peave, sorry I had to point that out) ...

OMG! Hey Solvy, Shadow here! There isn't much to say! I LOVE it! You know, you're my favourite poet ^^ haha on YWS that is :) I've read a lot ...

Wow, nice! I loved it by the way! I've noticed you're very good with poetry (I've read some of your other poems) and every time I see that you did ...

Hey, hey! Shadow here! I love it! It's sweet, and I love it! I know I'm not the best at reviewing, but oh well, I didn't see anything wrong with ...