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MeanMrMustard
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It will happen here. I have much to say. I'll message you when to come back.

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ForsakenAngel
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Hi, I'm not sure I know you, but I love how sophisticated this sounds. The last little bit of it--Hebrew?--is confusing, seeing as I don't know Hebrew :D But this is fairly amazing! I love it, you have a unique way of writing, and I'd like to take a look at some of your other stuff if you don't mind. Just send me a link and I'll be more than happy to read it! Keep writing, please, it's amazing!

~Forsakinshadow~

PS: This deserves a 'like'.

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earendil
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Finally, a chance to review something of yours.
I'll have to come back to this as well.

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Kamas
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Hebrew? I'll have a critique for this when I'm done with the others I plan on doing.



Positive anything is better than negative nothing.
— Elbert Hubbard