ForsakenAngel

Hello Plastic, Shadow here. I loved this because it painted a picture in my head. This is just amazing, even though it's rather short. I think maybe, if longer, this ...

Well hello EOD. Ok, first things first, there are a few misspelled words--such as which and controlled. I like this piece, it's nice, but I think for a chapter you ...

Wow! Hi, this is the frist time I've read anything of yours I believe, and I'm already liking it! I think I should start reading more of your stuff, this ...

Hi there, Shadow here. First, this is a rather good poem (if that's what you want to call it). Second, I agree with Nate about the contrast. It doesn't make ...

Hi there, Shadow here. Well, first of all, I love how it's short and sweet. It's romantic, and sort of cute in a way. My favorite part: Simple love to ...

Hi there, Shadow here. First off, this is really nice. 'Like'. I agree with Busheldood, the flow is really nice and the topic is amazing. As well as Busheldood, I ...

Hi, Shadow here. Wow, I like this, I really do. I admit, I'm not sure what the first word means, or what it is, but I might just be ignorant. ...

Hi there, Shadow here. First off, I agree with Idraax about that line. It doesn't make much since to me and it only confused me. I think my favourite part ...

Hi, Shadow here. Just one thing to say about this. I'll spoiler it. Wow! This is simply amazing. You have a unique way of writing and I do believe this ...

Hi, Shadow here. First, I agree with Idraax about the word "thru". It would make your writing seem more mature, not like a 13 year old wrote it, but like ...

I do believe this one is a bit better than the other one! I didn't see so many mistakes this time. But one thing that is still the same: Detail. ...

Hi, Sakin here as you asked. I'm going to take this piece by piece, ok? First, this is a really good piece. Second, I noticed there was no title, why ...

Hi, Sakin here! First of all, wow! I love this. Congratulations this made my night. You're a very talented person, I give you that. Keep writing! Other than the points ...

Hi there. First of all, I really loved this. Second, you did an amazing job at painting a picture in my head. I couldn't really see anything wrong with this ...

Hi, this is very lovely! Ok, there is just one thing, I'm kind of wondering if it's correct or not. The pain inside has now subside... I think it would ...