Enough To Say Goodnight

by LukanRinta
  • March 20, 2011
  • Poetry
  • Lyrical

Spoiler! :
The punctuation is probably horrible, and this is really old...


Infatuation.
A perfect fit.
Melded together.
My heart one with his.

Desolation.
This is my world.
Torn apart.
Two separate souls.

A man I never knew before.
Familiar yet strange.
He sent my heart and soul to way.
An unbearable rage.

Hold me close
But push me away.
I know this is better,
but I mourn to stay.

The darkness above,
now shrouded in light.
Goodnight my love.
To Heaven take flight.

A white dove,
A modest sight.
Goodnight my love.
To Heaven take flight.

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ForsakenAngel
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ForsakenAngel wrote a review · Sun Mar 27, 2011 6:41 am

Hi, Shadow here. Wow, I like this, I really do. I admit, I'm not sure what the first word means, or what it is, but I might just be ignorant. :D Anyway, overall I love it. I was a little confused, like Amber, but I got most of it enough that I understand it. Well, there isn't much to say about this, but I like it. 'Like'. If you need me to review anything else, don't hesitate to let me know, I'd be more than happy to take a look at it!

~Forsakinshadow~

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Amberla93
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Amberla93 wrote a review · Sat Mar 26, 2011 10:59 pm

I am confused, or maybe I'm reading it wrong... I take it, whoever she is talking to has died? Lovley piece by the way... Maybe I just confused myself, I don't know. :)

God Bless.



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— Creed, the Office