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  • Short Story » Supernatural, Historical Fiction Re: [Post Deleted]

    Hi there! Alright first off, this was just so amazing! I don't think I've ever read anything like this before, and I wasn't expecting this kind of story when I ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Realistic Re: Insanity Suffers

    Hi there, I'm here to review! Alright, so I'll be honest, a lot of this confused me, but I think I got the basic idea for the story down. I ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Gravity

    Hello again! I'm back for more :D My first thought: this is really good. I don't know how long you've been writing poetry, but from what I've read from you ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Take my Breath Away

    Hi there! First off, this is very clever and I love it. Second, even though this might have been posted as a vent, or for whatever other reason, it's really ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Starcrossed

    Hey there, I think I've reviewed something else of your's earlier. This is really good and wakegirl was right when she said that it's lyrical! The only thing I really ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: His Reality-"The Contract" Part 3

    Hello again :3 Getting used to seeing me? Let me start out by saying just how great you are at writing multiple poems that flow together. Once again, though, I ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: His Reality- Part 2 "Insomnia"

    Hello again! I'm back for more. First of all, let me tell you how good this is. It went with the first one perfectly, but I personally thought it was ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: His Reality

    Hi there! I think everything that I was going to say has been covered by Ninja! So I'll just tell you how good I thought it was :D I know ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: from the heart to the lips

    Hey there, Dream! This is, by far, one of the best poems I've read today (and I've read a lot.) The thing that bugged me the most, and always does, ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Slipping Away

    Hello! Where do I even start? This was just amazing and it struck me on a personal level. It's kind of sad and depressing, but things like what's described are ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Unfortunate Fate

    Hi, Forsaken here. I know this is from April, but I just found it, and I have to say, this is beautiful. The beginning of this started off a little ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Bus and Feeling Bad

    Hello there! The first one, The Bus, was good, from what I understood of it. I'm not very good with it, but I know good poetry when I see it ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Horror, Spiritual Re: Lord of Nightmares

    Forsaken here :D I know this was posted in April and I'm like two months late, but I only just found it! This is really, really good. I've been reading ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Conflicts

    Hi, Forsaken here! I realize this is old, but it doesn't have any reviews/comments and I just recently found it. Anywho, this is really good! The only mistake I found ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: The New Job

    Hi there, it's Forsaken! This is a really good piece, but it seemed too short to me. Maybe it's because I like reading longer stories. This is a really good ...

    Jun 24, 2012


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