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Hey there, I think I've reviewed something else of your's earlier.
I really do like this though, it's beautiful, like music for my eyes <3
This is really good and wakegirl was right when she said that it's lyrical!
The only thing I really didn't like about it was at the very end you said "Starcrossed lovers" and that didn't really flow. I think it would have sounded fine without that, but it's your poem, not mine and however you think it should be is the way it should be.
If you need anything else read/reviewed, just shoot me a PM and I'd be more than happy to take a look at it! Keep up the great work...
And stay insane, all of the best writers are c:
--ForsakenAngel
Ahhhhhhhh I love this it's so sweet and lyrical