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ForeverYoung299

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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: i overthought

    Hello, foreveryoung here for a review. Oh god! I was really confused and exhilerated and entertained at the same time. The background was really nice and it vividly portrays the ...

    Mar 18, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: BEYOND ME

    Hello. Foreveryoung299 here for a review. First of all, you should not use all caps. Pls de-capitalize the title. Now, coming to the poem. It was actually a good poem. ...

    Mar 15, 2021
  • Art » Health, Other Re: The Power of Words

    Hello, forever young here for a short review. Words once spoken can not be retrieved; Life once taken can not be given back. You see, there is so similarity between ...

    Mar 14, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Chapter 1

    Hello! Forever young for a short review. Why did you change the perspective??? In the prologue, you wrote in first person, which was very cool but you changed the person- ...

    Mar 13, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1- The Queen

    Hello, Forever young here to leave a review. I am gonna judge each and every line, if I can. I have enough time now. I am sorry if I am ...

    Mar 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Hermes

    hello, forever young here to leave a very short review. I was immeresed in the sea of emotions! I love this so much! although I really loved the poem, here ...

    Mar 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Save me

    Hello. ForeverYoung299 here with a very short review. I really like short poems and that was the first reason I started reading your poem and I finished it before I ...

    Mar 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Literature, Health Re: Perfect

    Hello, foreveryoung299 here to leave a short review. I get you. It's a tough situation to go through... THINGS I LIKED Your poetry is a thought conveying one. You make ...

    Mar 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: The Moon

    Hello. ForeverYoung299 here for a review. I don't know if it would be long enough to be a review or not, but I will try. The moon–I don't know if ...

    Mar 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: February *

    Hello. Here for a short review. You seem to be a new member. If you need any help, you can always ask me. Now, let's jump to the review. This ...

    Mar 8, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Austin M.

    You have written so many poems! That's great and I struggle to write one... Whatever, here to review your work. I could feel your feelings through the poem. What love ...

    Mar 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Riddle

    Hello. This will not be an exact rview but kinda like that only. I really liked the riddles. I like this type of poetry riddles in general... they have a ...

    Mar 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Literature, Theatre Re: Falter

    Hello, foreveryoung299 here to review your work. It's your first work here and you mastered it. That's great. Glows: You are successful in conveying your message– your depression. It's really ...

    Mar 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Health, Culture Re: pointing fingers

    Hey, foreveryoung299 to give a short review. This was so relatable. I was spell bound, speechless... They are so many words like that. You will find a thousand people finding ...

    Mar 8, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Fantasy Re: Prologue

    Hello, ForeverYoung299 here for a review. This was a great start. The description of the house was good. I think the house is nearby(at least not so far) to the ...

    Mar 8, 2021


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