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Re: i overthought
Hello, foreveryoung here for a review. Oh god! I was really confused and exhilerated and entertained at the same time. The background was really nice and it vividly portrays the ...
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Re: BEYOND ME
Hello. Foreveryoung299 here for a review. First of all, you should not use all caps. Pls de-capitalize the title. Now, coming to the poem. It was actually a good poem. ...
Mar 15, 2021 -
Re: The Power of Words
Hello, forever young here for a short review. Words once spoken can not be retrieved; Life once taken can not be given back. You see, there is so similarity between ...
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Re: Chapter 1
Hello! Forever young for a short review. Why did you change the perspective??? In the prologue, you wrote in first person, which was very cool but you changed the person- ...
Mar 13, 2021 -
Re: Chapter 1- The Queen
Hello, Forever young here to leave a review. I am gonna judge each and every line, if I can. I have enough time now. I am sorry if I am ...
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Re: Hermes
hello, forever young here to leave a very short review. I was immeresed in the sea of emotions! I love this so much! although I really loved the poem, here ...
Mar 12, 2021 -
Re: Save me
Hello. ForeverYoung299 here with a very short review. I really like short poems and that was the first reason I started reading your poem and I finished it before I ...
Mar 11, 2021 -
Re: Perfect
Hello, foreveryoung299 here to leave a short review. I get you. It's a tough situation to go through... THINGS I LIKED Your poetry is a thought conveying one. You make ...
Mar 9, 2021 -
Re: The Moon
Hello. ForeverYoung299 here for a review. I don't know if it would be long enough to be a review or not, but I will try. The moon–I don't know if ...
Mar 9, 2021 -
Re: February *
Hello. Here for a short review. You seem to be a new member. If you need any help, you can always ask me. Now, let's jump to the review. This ...
Mar 8, 2021 -
Re: Austin M.
You have written so many poems! That's great and I struggle to write one... Whatever, here to review your work. I could feel your feelings through the poem. What love ...
Mar 8, 2021 -
Re: Riddle
Hello. This will not be an exact rview but kinda like that only. I really liked the riddles. I like this type of poetry riddles in general... they have a ...
Mar 8, 2021 -
Re: Falter
Hello, foreveryoung299 here to review your work. It's your first work here and you mastered it. That's great. Glows: You are successful in conveying your message– your depression. It's really ...
Mar 8, 2021 -
Re: pointing fingers
Hey, foreveryoung299 to give a short review. This was so relatable. I was spell bound, speechless... They are so many words like that. You will find a thousand people finding ...
Mar 8, 2021 -
Re: Prologue
Hello, ForeverYoung299 here for a review. This was a great start. The description of the house was good. I think the house is nearby(at least not so far) to the ...
Mar 8, 2021
