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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Course of Life

    Hey! Forever here with a review! Did you know that you were the first person to post on "Let your emotions flow in this river called life, let it soak ...

    Sep 1, 2021
  • Poetry » Chickens, Health Re: ​Chickens Aspiring (Acrostic)

    Hey!! Forever here with a review!! Let me try a review template for reviewing this. Two at once. :D first impression Wow! I really love the acrostic. I am reading ...

    Sep 2, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Petrichor

    Heyy! Forever here with a tiny review! Wow, the title. The word "petrichor" has its place in my favorite words list. So, the title attracted me. First of all, with ...

    Aug 31, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Whatever

    Heyy!! Forever here with a review! "Midnight thoughts" is pretty good good to topic to write on and especially when one can't sleep for the thoughts in their mind. Let's ...

    Aug 29, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.2

    Heyyyy!! Forever here with a review!! Points: “Can’t blame them for that, I suppose the only way to beat the system is to time everything to the millisecond," said Aria. ...

    Aug 28, 2021
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: The Assassin

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was quite intriguing. Let's get into it. Characters: The main character is obviously the assassin. Now, I wonder if he is a positive ...

    Sep 2, 2021
  • Script » Humor, Science Fiction Re: A (Totally Not Evil) Bakesale, Act 7

    Hey I am here for a very short review. It's been an century since I had completed the last chapter. Anyway, let's hwt right into it. :D The play is ...

    Sep 1, 2021
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: That's Just My Life

    Hey!! Forever here with a review!! This is my very first (?) song review, so don't except perfection. Never except perfection from me. Anyway, let's get right into it. The ...

    Sep 1, 2021
  • Article / Essay » General, Health Re: Imperfections within Snow

    Hey!!! Forever here with a very short review!! Before Reading and after seeing the title and also the description : Quite interesting. What does this deal with? Is it with ...

    Sep 1, 2021
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: Weight

    Hey! Forever here with a short review!! Glad that you changed Christmas to Christmas eve. That makes more sense now. However, I think it would be better to change the ...

    Aug 27, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.3

    Hey! Forever here with a review! Again we are gonna have five parts in this chapter. *Facepalms* Let's review not thinking of that for the time being and let me ...

    Aug 30, 2021
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Blue Like Mine

    Hey RandomTalks! Forever here with a review! I will get to the tiny nitpicks first: She was swinging on the swing set in our garden, her tiny fingers clutching the ...

    Sep 1, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.1

    Hey! Forever here with a short review!! Mrs. Kane seems to be a highly optimistic woman and I am afraid that can prove to be an equally dangerous thing in ...

    Aug 25, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Realistic Re: A Carolina Millennial in A Prehistoric Tribe: Chapter Four

    Hey!!!! Forever here with a short review! So, first your question. It's a good idea to put the epigraph. I went back to the other chapters to see, they too ...

    Aug 26, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Needs Title! suggestions welcome!

    Heyyyyy!! Forever here with a review!! I will point out a few things at first: "Come on Berka, we can't stay here all day," Berka gave out a loud neigh ...

    Aug 24, 2021


When I was young, I admired clever people. Now that I am old, I admire kind people.
— Abraham Heschel