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Re: Course of Life
Hey! Forever here with a review! Did you know that you were the first person to post on "Let your emotions flow in this river called life, let it soak ...
Sep 1, 2021 -
Re: Chickens Aspiring (Acrostic)
Hey!! Forever here with a review!! Let me try a review template for reviewing this. Two at once. :D first impression Wow! I really love the acrostic. I am reading ...
Sep 2, 2021 -
Re: Petrichor
Heyy! Forever here with a tiny review! Wow, the title. The word "petrichor" has its place in my favorite words list. So, the title attracted me. First of all, with ...
Aug 31, 2021 -
Re: Whatever
Heyy!! Forever here with a review! "Midnight thoughts" is pretty good good to topic to write on and especially when one can't sleep for the thoughts in their mind. Let's ...
Aug 29, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.2
Heyyyy!! Forever here with a review!! Points: “Can’t blame them for that, I suppose the only way to beat the system is to time everything to the millisecond," said Aria. ...
Aug 28, 2021 -
Re: The Assassin
Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was quite intriguing. Let's get into it. Characters: The main character is obviously the assassin. Now, I wonder if he is a positive ...
Sep 2, 2021 -
Re: A (Totally Not Evil) Bakesale, Act 7
Hey I am here for a very short review. It's been an century since I had completed the last chapter. Anyway, let's hwt right into it. :D The play is ...
Sep 1, 2021 -
Re: That's Just My Life
Hey!! Forever here with a review!! This is my very first (?) song review, so don't except perfection. Never except perfection from me. Anyway, let's get right into it. The ...
Sep 1, 2021 -
Re: Imperfections within Snow
Hey!!! Forever here with a very short review!! Before Reading and after seeing the title and also the description : Quite interesting. What does this deal with? Is it with ...
Sep 1, 2021 -
Re: Weight
Hey! Forever here with a short review!! Glad that you changed Christmas to Christmas eve. That makes more sense now. However, I think it would be better to change the ...
Aug 27, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.3
Hey! Forever here with a review! Again we are gonna have five parts in this chapter. *Facepalms* Let's review not thinking of that for the time being and let me ...
Aug 30, 2021 -
Re: Blue Like Mine
Hey RandomTalks! Forever here with a review! I will get to the tiny nitpicks first: She was swinging on the swing set in our garden, her tiny fingers clutching the ...
Sep 1, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.1
Hey! Forever here with a short review!! Mrs. Kane seems to be a highly optimistic woman and I am afraid that can prove to be an equally dangerous thing in ...
Aug 25, 2021 -
Re: A Carolina Millennial in A Prehistoric Tribe: Chapter Four
Hey!!!! Forever here with a short review! So, first your question. It's a good idea to put the epigraph. I went back to the other chapters to see, they too ...
Aug 26, 2021 -
Re: Needs Title! suggestions welcome!
Heyyyyy!! Forever here with a review!! I will point out a few things at first: "Come on Berka, we can't stay here all day," Berka gave out a loud neigh ...
Aug 24, 2021
