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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Course of Life

    Hey! Forever here with a review! Did you know that you were the first person to post on "Let your emotions flow in this river called life, let it soak ...

    Sep 1, 2021
  • Poetry » Chickens, Health Re: ​Chickens Aspiring (Acrostic)

    Hey!! Forever here with a review!! Let me try a review template for reviewing this. Two at once. :D first impression Wow! I really love the acrostic. I am reading ...

    Sep 2, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Petrichor

    Heyy! Forever here with a tiny review! Wow, the title. The word "petrichor" has its place in my favorite words list. So, the title attracted me. First of all, with ...

    Aug 31, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Whatever

    Heyy!! Forever here with a review! "Midnight thoughts" is pretty good good to topic to write on and especially when one can't sleep for the thoughts in their mind. Let's ...

    Aug 29, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.2

    Heyyyy!! Forever here with a review!! Points: “Can’t blame them for that, I suppose the only way to beat the system is to time everything to the millisecond," said Aria. ...

    Aug 28, 2021
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: The Assassin

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was quite intriguing. Let's get into it. Characters: The main character is obviously the assassin. Now, I wonder if he is a positive ...

    Sep 2, 2021
  • Script » Humor, Science Fiction Re: A (Totally Not Evil) Bakesale, Act 7

    Hey I am here for a very short review. It's been an century since I had completed the last chapter. Anyway, let's hwt right into it. :D The play is ...

    Sep 1, 2021
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: That's Just My Life

    Hey!! Forever here with a review!! This is my very first (?) song review, so don't except perfection. Never except perfection from me. Anyway, let's get right into it. The ...

    Sep 1, 2021
  • Article / Essay » General, Health Re: Imperfections within Snow

    Hey!!! Forever here with a very short review!! Before Reading and after seeing the title and also the description : Quite interesting. What does this deal with? Is it with ...

    Sep 1, 2021
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: Weight

    Hey! Forever here with a short review!! Glad that you changed Christmas to Christmas eve. That makes more sense now. However, I think it would be better to change the ...

    Aug 27, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.3

    Hey! Forever here with a review! Again we are gonna have five parts in this chapter. *Facepalms* Let's review not thinking of that for the time being and let me ...

    Aug 30, 2021
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Blue Like Mine

    Hey RandomTalks! Forever here with a review! I will get to the tiny nitpicks first: She was swinging on the swing set in our garden, her tiny fingers clutching the ...

    Sep 1, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.1

    Hey! Forever here with a short review!! Mrs. Kane seems to be a highly optimistic woman and I am afraid that can prove to be an equally dangerous thing in ...

    Aug 25, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Realistic Re: A Carolina Millennial in A Prehistoric Tribe: Chapter Four

    Hey!!!! Forever here with a short review! So, first your question. It's a good idea to put the epigraph. I went back to the other chapters to see, they too ...

    Aug 26, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Needs Title! suggestions welcome!

    Heyyyyy!! Forever here with a review!! I will point out a few things at first: "Come on Berka, we can't stay here all day," Berka gave out a loud neigh ...

    Aug 24, 2021


Words are pale shadows of forgotten names. As names have power, words have power. Words can light fires in the minds of men. Words can wring tears from the hardest hearts.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind