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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: John-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies

    Hey! Forever here with a tiny review!! Ah well, this was something which I was very much expecting. Anyway, into the review. I would really like to know a bit ...

    Apr 9, 2022
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: Caged

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! The title caught my attention and I wanted to know what the story had to tell about being caged. So here I am to ...

    Apr 10, 2022
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: Spider Houise

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was an interesting story. It fell into the mysterious genre more than that of horror and supernatural. Very honestly speaking, I didn't feel ...

    Apr 9, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 13: Start the Change

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Huh so my whole review got deleted, let me type it up last I have got some time to review your piece. The first ...

    Apr 9, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Penelope’s story-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! It's actually quite interesting to jump in into a story skipping some parts. I have already forgotten if I have read the origin stories ...

    Apr 8, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: One Day to Live

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was an intriguing read. I really liked how you combined past and mystery with horror in the story. Anyway, into the review now. ...

    Apr 7, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Mystery / Suspense Re: LoaMR: Ch.XVII: The Past of a Writer 1

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! We are already in chapter 17 now! We have reached quite far. Anyway. I wasn't very much expecting to meet Julius this soon but ...

    Apr 6, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Nova-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was interesting. The life of Nova seems to be kind of a morally tragic one when it comes to the clowns. Like without ...

    Apr 1, 2022
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: The Zombie Stories (Part 2 of 2)

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Well, this was something. I definitely wasn't expecting this to be very honest. Into the review anyway. I really liked how the entries became ...

    Mar 31, 2022
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: The Zombie Stories (Part 1 of 2)

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! First of all, I loved the story! It was such a concrete and well-built story. Anyway, let's get into the review!! As it seemed ...

    Mar 31, 2022
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Horror Re: The Plague

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was a cool story but I was very confused in the end. Okay so first of all, with the title. I found no ...

    Apr 1, 2022
  • Short Story » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: Red Ribbon

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was such a tragic story. I wouldn't say that I wasn't expecting this but still it came as a shock. Anyway, into the ...

    Apr 1, 2022
  • Short Story » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: Killer In Seattle

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! First and foremost, a person simply cannot write a story during dying. So, that is a huge contradiction here. When you kill a person ...

    Apr 1, 2022
  • Short Story » General, Horror Re: Kill Shot

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was more of a scene than a short story but I really enjoyed reading it. You presented us with a great mystery which ...

    Mar 31, 2022
  • Short Story » Horror, Fantasy Re: The Secret of the Scarecrows

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was a very intriguing read! I really liked how you managed to gift us with such a great short story in so small ...

    Mar 31, 2022


The bird that would soar above the level plain of tradition and prejudice must have strong wings. It is a sad spectacle to see the weaklings bruised, exhausted, fluttering back to earth.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening