ForeverTwilightAngel

I am definatly interested in this piece. However, it's Kovu, unless you've changed it, and its short. I wish it was longer, because it's very interesting! Good Job!

This is amazing. One, because I'm experiancing this myself, and it does show how my life is going right now. Much too fast. I have nothing at all to correct, ...

Can't wait to read more, that is amazing!

I dont really review things, just compliment/give small pointers. It's a bit confusing but I thought it was pretty good. It gave emotion and an image (to me, at least) ...

I personally liked this, and I have nothing bad to say. Good Job!

Thank you both for the feedback. I'll edit it later, I'm having alot of trouble with this story but I can't stop writing it. I struggle with this story over ...

Thanks guys. I really appreciate this, and I just edited it. Thanks for the feedback. I know its still not good, but I did as much as I thought of. ...

This is personally, realy good. I enjoyed reading it and understood what the horse felt, even though I'm not one. Creative and Intresting, and I really enjoyed reading it.

I thought that this was really good, for not being a poet. I've never been a good poet, but I've never thought of using it to help writers block. That's, ...

This Is really good! I can't wait to read more.

Lol Really funny, I especially like Ron's first set of lines. Very creative and funny

One word: Amazing I really like how it just, flows so well, because nobody will know these things until it happens. But they cannot tell us. It really gets you ...

It can be confusing with the breaks but I thought that it was amazing. I didn't mind the breaks because it was really good!

This is amazing. Its really interesting when you imagine it like a movie. The Poem is beautiful and creative. Great Job!

the first paragraph: Yep. I agree. the second: Dont get it but its interesting. Good Poem!