ForeverRebel

Hi there. A fellow Plaguer here to review. ;) I think that you have a lovely poem here. It's relatable to many people, minus myself. XD I enjoyed the words ...

Hey there! Rebel to review. I enjoyed this piece. You had decent description in the first two sentences. The sentence "For how will I explain the tear, softly caressing my ...

Hey there! Rebel here to review. I thought this was a decent short story. It's depressing that both of the characters became involved in something serious like drugs, and I've ...

Hi there. Rebel here to review your poem. I think that you have a decent start to your poem. It drew me in, wanting to know the rest of the ...

Hi there. Rebel to review. Before I start on my review, welcome to YWS! :) Now onto the review. For my liking, I felt that it could've been longer. How ...

Hello there. Sorry I'm slightly late with my review of your third chapter. -__- I really enjoyed reading this chapter. It was lengthy, but it was worth reading all of ...

Hello. :) Sorry I'm a little late with reviewing your second chapter here. I haven't really had access to a computer for a week-I was out of town. Anyways, I'll ...

Hello there. Rebel here to review. Right off the bat, I wasn't too found of your rhyming. It was consistent maybe 75%-80% of the time. If you're going to use ...

Hi there. Since you reviewed my poem, I thought I'd return the favor. I liked reading this string of haikus. I thought that you did a good job with tying ...

Hello. Rebel here to review your poem. This poem was very deep and emotional. You transferred your emotions in a lucid way; I could tell how you felt about Pops. ...

Hello. Rebel to review again. (: For me, this chapter is a major improvement from your first attempt. I liked that you elaborated on the fight going on between the ...

Hello. Rebel to review. :) I think you've got an excellent plot for your story. You're touching on a subject that I think a lot of Christian teens in high ...

Hi there. Rebel to review. I noticed right off the bat that this piece was one large paragraph. Paragraphs are your friend! After about 6-8 sentences, you need to begin ...

Hi there. Rebel here to review. :) I enjoyed reading this poem. I felt like your imagery was weaved nicely throughout the entire poem. Your diction wasn't too shabby either. ...

Hello there. Rebel to review your story. (: I enjoyed reading your short story. It was suspenseful, and it kept me wanting to read more. Here are mistakes I found: ...