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Re: Hide N' Go Seek Championships
Hi there! Rebel here to review. :D I thought this was a cute short story. It reminded me of this game my cousins, brothers, friends, and I used to play ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: The Nightmare
Hi John! Rebel here to review. :) I did enjoy this. I really did. You had a nice description; it was easy for me to envision the scene that you ...
Jan 4, 2014 -
Re: I am not a jigsaw
Hi Dark! Rebel here to review. :) I think you portrayed that marriage isn't for everyone just fine. I think that people who don't want to be married are sometimes ...
Jan 3, 2014 -
Re: Just a Cliché
Hi Lucrezia! Rebel here to review. :) I enjoyed your short story. It kept me interested the whole way through; I never felt like dropping off anywhere throughout the story. ...
Jan 3, 2014 -
Re: Sirens, Sirens.
Hi. Rebel here to review. :D I could relate to this poem 100%. My town has been affected by numerous natural disasters. It's a tough thing to go through when ...
Nov 22, 2013 -
Re: Fading.... (Not a continuing story just something i wrote when i was upset)
Hi there. Rebel here to review. I think what you have here is decent so far. I think that it's emotional, especially the second paragraph. I think it could be ...
Oct 28, 2013 -
Re: To The One I Never Knew
This is my first time reading one of your pieces, and I must say that I really enjoyed it. The thing I liked most about this piece is your beginning ...
Oct 28, 2013 -
Re: Illusion - Prologue
Hi there, Rebel here to review! You tackled a very sensitive subject that seems to be going on the rise, and I feel like you completely nailed what most people ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: A story from fallen leaves
Hi there, Rebel here to review. I loved the oodles and oodles of imagery that you used in this poem. I thoroughly enjoy when poets use imagery, and especially when ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: The Sun Protested
Hi there! Rebel here to review. I agree with Niraco and LittleCaroleen about the second half being much better than the first half. I felt that the second half flowed ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Haiku
Hi there, Rebel to review! I enjoy reading and writing haikus, so I felt that I needed to read this one. :) I liked the first line. I began to ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Subconscious Phenomena
Hi, Rebel here to review! I liked your short story. I think the plot was interesting, and it made me want to read your story until the very end. You ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: "Eyes Lies"
Hi there! Rebel here to review. :) My favorite part of your poem was the beginning. I liked the imagery, and I imagined myself kind go being in the character's ...
Oct 17, 2013 -
Re: If My Breath Stops
Hi there. Rebel here to review. I liked your poem a lot. The flow was very nice. It wasn't too fast or too slow. I also enjoyed how it was ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Concinnity
Hey there. Rebel to review. Your vocabulary left me speechless. I'm not going to lie, I had to look up a few words in your poem to know what they ...
Aug 25, 2013