Flower~Child

Your poem caught my eye because my user name and the name of your poem hehe. In any case this is sweet relief to me. I've been on here for ...

Hey it's Flower and I'm here for a review. I'm going to warn you in advance I'm a pretty harsh reviewer, but it's all for the betterment of your writing. ...

Where the capital letters are is where the next line begins.

I think a guy from my school made that hahah.

I feel I must comment here because no-one really understands what I'm getting at. Ok these are two people at the pond. The green and brown circles are eyes, the ...

It means you smell the food. IT was meant to give you an idea of your surroundings.

This is part of my novel I do believe I set it up this way. As for this chapter I will make it longer later. I didn't have time and ...

Thank you for the comments guys. Y'all do indeed have some dirty minds though haha. Take it however you see it I suppose.

I was just thinking of all the people that do stuff to deal with pain but they do it to be seen. It just gave me the idea to write ...

What is happening in this poem is: The girl is dating this guy and her dreams are flooded with the memories of what he does every night, which is to ...

Indeed you may Raz :D

My my Warrior fiesty haha. These are all different poems by the way, not just different stanza's.

Woot Woot! I love it!

I really like chapter 2 of this story. It is way more gripping, and I really was truly curious to what was happening. I didn't really see any errors in ...

Hey, Steph, here as requested. I wanna start by saying that I adore this piece, but I am going to try to be of help. Beware of the darkness, they ...