Flower~Child

This poem really confused me, are you talking about two men being in love? Other than my confusion I liked this. I do think I know what you are talking ...

Hello friend, Flower here as requested. I really enjoyed reading this piece. I think you did well at writing in such an old fashion, I know how difficult that must ...

I liked this story, but it reminded me of The Phantom of the Opera. The description of the monster is almost the same as the description of the phantom. Anyway ...

When I read this I fell in love with it. It felt as if you were writing a poem for my life at the moment. I guess it's because I ...

I liked it, but like ziggie said above it is hard to get the picture of what you are talking about. The mental image I got was bird, because of ...

Hello there, I'm flower and I am just going to tell you what I thought of this as I read it. I think this is a lovely poem full of ...

Hello scifres and welcome to YWS, I am Flower and I will be your reviewer for today. After reading through this I just have a few things to point out: ...

Hello Jeanette and welcome to YWS, I am Flower and will be reviewing for you today. I really liked this poem a lot. I felt the emotion in it, but ...

When thy eyes touched mine For the very first time I knew it would be forever That we were meant to stay together And I had to keep my faith ...

Alright Flower here for a quick review. Well I thought that the begining was a bit sketchy, but as i kept reading I loved it! It was simply wonderful, I ...

Flower here for a quick review. The first thing I saw was the rhyme scheme changed in the second stanza, it seemed totally different. Also it should be "when your ...

I really love this my friend, I haven't seen your work in a while. I really like the rhyme scheme you have her, it was very nice. The only thing ...

Ok, well I might not be much help, but I am going to try! I liked this but I think that the stain pain thing is overused. Make up new ...

To be really honest this really bored me. You seem to have tried with description but the words you used are boring. One of the things that I wondered was ...

Today's the day I start my life All over again once more. Today I find a better cause That's more worth fighting for. - Today's the day I give up ...