Flower~Child

I came across your poem after reading another poem and reading you comment on that poem. I wanted to read it because in your comment you bragged of maturity in ...

Hey there, Flow here and I will be your reviewer for the evening. The only thing that really just grabbed my attention in this poem was it's title. When I ...

Hey there, Flow here and I will be your reviewer for the evening. The one thing I noticed about your poem is that you just repeat things. For all of ...

Ah I see that your new! Welcome to the site, my name is Flower and I will be your reviewer for the evening. First off I'd like to say I ...

You one and only mentor here for a review! So I read this since it is something you plan on using for a contest and I hope I can help ...

This doesn't really suggest anything as a poem. I would change it to lyrics because that's what I and most others see in this. I think that in order to ...

I have been contemplating reviewing this for quite some time now so I figure I will do so now. I want to start off by saying I do love this ...

Ok well I like you poem but that's about all I can say. Nothing really stood out to me. It was good dont get me wrong but it didn't give ...

O my goodness! So I was burning up and after reading this I have chills. This is my favorite stanza. My love was my forever, but now he is my ...

I felt the need to comment on this poem for the sole reaosn that I read the first review. All the emotions in this poem make sense you just have ...

Hey there :) Flow here as requested by you. This piece left me a bit confused here. I got the mental picture of a library right away, but I didn't ...

Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the evening. I read through this and the word that caught in my mind was choppy and also jumpy. You have ...

Hey there flow here! I liked your poem, but it really stopped at that. I mean you had a good story, and the big words that look good. I think ...

Well love poems arent really my thing, but I'm going to take a crack at this. So the first thing that I noticed with this is that you repeat words ...

This is simply beautiful. I have always loved your work and this is nothing short of the rest of your poems. I love the syle of the stanzas. It reminds ...