Swagger

This doesn't really suggest anything as a poem. I would change it to lyrics because that's what I and most others see in this. I think that in order to develope this into a poem you need some sort of story line. I think you also need some description in there at some point.

You said you don't usually swear in poems and I think some of it should be left out here. It is very distracting from the whole of the poem.

As for format I don't think the underscores are needed here. I think it would have the same effect if you left it at the begining of the line.

I do think that this would make a better song than it would a poem. I would consider changing it over, it would be nice as a song.

-Flow-

It's an original idea, but I don't think you've utilized it's potential to the maximum. You could have put a nice twist on it, or some clever images - instead it just feels a little like someone trying to rap to show how tough they are, and it doesn't feel right. You have, however, done a good job creating a narrator, and it's authentic - it just feels too unreal for me.

your poem, for lack of a better word is... interesting. and what's a weeble?

I could imagine it making a good rap!
Not sure if this is the right section for it, though...
Also, without meaning to be rude, what's a weeble?

Well....
It's very emotional....
really...

I don't know what else to say....

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-Jojo