FlamingPhoenix

hi jessiebear hear to review. I like the poem rxmanticism. But it is a bit confusing. And it needs a little bit more description. and sum fall stops is in ...

Hi jessiebear hear to review. Okay I love the poem it poets me in a good mood and it is relacing. And gentile to my so that is a grate ...

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Hi Eros, jessiebear here with a short review on your poem. I really liked the concept in this poem, it has a really sad, but romantic feeling to it. Your ...

Hi jessiebear here to review your poem. TheSilverFox I loved the poem just I think I could do with a little more fixing up. And I dos not want this ...

Hi jessiebear hear to review. Ok I love the poem I can amazing it so that is good. But maybe ad a bit more fall stops for ins tins (In ...

Hi stegosaurus jessiebear hear to rite a review. Ok I love the poem I think it rimes well and I cant fined any spelling mistakes. What I think needs fixing ...

Hi SereneSimpliciT jessiebear is righting a review on how to help you in prove this poem. What I like a pout this poem is that it rimes really well to ...

Hi cpedro jessiebear hair to rite a review. Ok I like it a lot but I think it can have a little bit more work like for instants a little ...

Hi jessiebear is rating a review. Ok Kaizenex I love the poem put I can't really sea and feel it. So I think you should ad a bit mare ascription ...

Hi Felistia Jessiebear is talking to you. I love the way you described the clouds. And the sentence after that but the bit I wold like you to in prove ...

Hi I am jessiebear and I love what you said. it was very nice. But I think it needs more description. like what did it feel like and you said ...