Fizz

I think you're really brave, well done. I suffer from trich, and it's not something I usually feel comfortable talking about. You've made me think that maybe I should change ...

Hey! Loving it. Beautiful. So I can see that this punctuation business is pretty important to you, so this review might just be really useless. I just think this doesn't ...

Wow. Intense. Your skills are pretty righteous. Petty nit-picking things; I think quotation marks are needed in the first stanza, 'Stop, you're hurting me, ow' Maybe a period after 'blood ...

I'm confuuuuuused. This doesn't make sense in a technical way, mostly because I think your punctuation is messy. It's unclear whether you are addressing 'baby' to tell them that they ...

Love it. There is one thing I'm passionate about, and that is that your poetry doesn't have to make sense to everyone who reads it. It's yours. It means whatever ...

Loving it. It's a talent to convey so much emotion and meaning in so few words. It's personal, without actually creating a character. That final stanza is straight up genius. ...

Loving it. Your use of the visual as well as the verbal really works. Seriously rad. You haven't used periods at the end of your sentences, but I feel like ...

Beautiful. You told us everything without saying it, and with so much finesse. Your use of metaphor is brilliant, and I think I love you. I really like this. I ...

'Any spelling errors or grammatical inconstancies can be placed carefully in a place where the sun doesn't shine' Do you mind if I start using that in my own posts? ...

I'm really unsure of exactly what this is supposed to be, form wise. I'm going to assume that it's an article, and if it's not then, you bad. First up, ...

This captivated me. I feel so sad, and I kind of didn't want it to end there. I know that was purposeful, but I'm attached now! I don't really have ...

Hey :) It took me a few reads to pick out problems in this poem. I think I was distracted by how beautiful it sounded. Your third stanza gave me ...

Hey :) This is the longest sentence I have ever read. I think you need to separate some of this with a period. If it's a deliberate feature, then that's ...

Straight up I have to say thank you for writing a poem that doesn't rhyme. Rhyming makes me crazy. When people first start writing poetry they often rely a bit ...

Ok, so...I just went back and read the first two chapters of this, because I want to give you a proper review. I want to start with some extremely mundane ...