Fireweed

Thank you all for your feedback. :) Cadmium, thanks for your suggestions on the structure. I'm a bit confused about how you think I should combine the lines... Did I ...

I really like it. Short and simple, but it gets it's point across very well. Yeah. I don't really have anyhthing to say that others haven't. Nice work.

Yes, I love the rhythm and the music words. I think you captured orchestra music perfectly. Nice work. ^_^

I've read it... I was kind of disappointed by it, I guess. I loved "Speak" which is by the same author, but I wasn't as impressed with "Catalyst."

Lovely description! You captured autumn perfectly. :)

A little angsty, but I like it. It had a very lost, mournful tone. I like the repetition and the wind simile.

Very vivid imagery. I liked this. :)

It's clever... not exactly the most deep and meaningful poem, but it was fun to read. Nice work.

Awwww... This is very sweet, and I love the way you worded everything. The image of clouds passing the moon is lovely. It's a bit cliche in a few parts, ...

Thanks for your crit. I heard the song recently, it's pretty cool. The version I heard was in english, with one part in german. The german part sounds so cool... ...

'Tis simple, but very pretty. I like how you create such a vivid picture in the readers mind using so few words.

Cool. It rhymes very well, it doesn't sound forced at all. Like Xanthan said, It's an interesting subject. I love it when people's writing is inspired by mythology.

I think this is definitely more like poetry than fiction...

I've eaten ommelets for dinner... This poem was quite amusing.

Inkheart is quite good, and the Thief Lord is better yet. It's intended for younger kids, I think, but still a great story.