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Hi there! This definitely put a smile on my face, thank you for that! I believe my favorite part is this: "Hey, everybody, and welcome to youngwritersociety.com! I'm your host, ...

Aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh! I cannot wait for the next chapter!!! This is really good and I am hooked! Please, Please tag me when you write the next one. Now, I have one ...

Hi there! This is good! It is well written and well formatted. You did a really good job writing this. I especially love the mystery. "Next to me is the ...

Hey, it's me again. I've noticed that you haven't gotten any reviews, so I'll do my best. As I said before, I really like this. This keep getting more and ...

Hi there! So this is good, and interesting. Now, I want to make it clear that I am not trying to be harsh or critical, I really did enjoy this. ...

Hi there! So this was very interesting, and very, very well written. I like it. Especially the ending, I did not see that coming! XD. The beginning was a little ...

Hi there! First off, Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy yourself here and have a lot of fun! This poem is really good. I love the word use, the ...

Hey! All right. I'm going to jump right into predictions here. The biggest one has to do with the plague-like disease. Kartiel may have healing magic, but it may not ...

Hi there! So this is really good. I love the rhythm you have going here, especially at the end! The rhyming at the end is also really good, and fun! ...

This is an amazing poem. You definitely have talent, keep up the amazing work! This is a very, very relatable piece of work, I really enjoyed reading it. I am ...

Hi there! This is a very interesting poem! I really like it, and there is only one line that is awkward: “You’re a stranger to me.” I scream, bashing it ...

Hi there! So, this is an interesting poem! It is true for a lot of people, sadly. I'm sorry you are going through this, feel free to PM me if ...

Hello there! Okay, just, wow! This poem is amazing, and it really, really touched my heart. I understand completely how you feel, what you have been through. I applaud you ...

Ahaha! Great poem! I needed a laugh today, and you just gave me that. Thank you so much! I love the rhythm you have going, it's awesome. I think my ...

This is so interesting! I love it! I can't wait to read more of it. You are writing this out really, really well. The only suggestion I have is to ...