FireSpyGirl

Hi there! So this is an interesting poem, but I love it! I'm afraid that I don't have much to say, as this a good poem and well executed! I ...

Hi there! This is a good story and interesting! I look forward to more! So when I review, I try not to be too harsh and I try not to ...

Hi there! So I like this story, and I like what it tells and how it speaks straight the readers heart. I just have few corrections. First one: "as i'm ...

Hi there! I saw nothing wrong with this chapter. I really liked it, and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed it until now. You balance really well between being descriptive, but ...

Hi there! I am really, really looking forward to more! This is a really engaging chapter! So I'm afraid that I don't have much critiquing to offer, as I didn't ...

Hi there! So this is an interesting chapter, if not a little creepy. :D. I like that though. I don't have anything to suggest, really. I only noticed that one ...

Hi there! This such a cute story! I love how simple it is without being to simple. This story is very easy for the reader to feel and understand. I ...

Hi there! This poems speaks a lot and is good. I am going to jump right into this review and break it down step by step. This first line: "So ...

Hi there! This is a cute story! I like it. :). There is one sentence that I would change up a bit. This one: “Guys, come on. If we fly ...

Hi there! I'm going to jump right into this review. First off, I love the simplicity of this poem! It helped me feel this poem. As for your question at ...

Hi there and welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here. So this is a really good poem! So there are just a few small things that I noticed, ...

FireSpyGirl here to review another chapter! I am really enjoying these chapters and I am enjoying seeing this story develop! So I know that my past reviews haven't been the ...

Hi there! This is a very interesting poem. To me, it is actually kind of realistic. To me, this poem is telling about someone who is sitting at a computer ...

Hi there! So I really don't have much critiquing or suggestions to offer, as this is a very interesting chapter. I like the imagery, and I like how well you ...

Hi there! So, I will start with what I liked about this story, and that was the emotion, and the fact that it really gets to me. The content is ...