Young Writers Society

This sums up my late nights. This spoke to me directly, I love your wording so much.
I used to have a roomate and we used stay awake till the early hours talking aout life and everything els. And this boughtb ack so many memories.
Thank you.

This sums up my late nights. This spoke to me directly, I love your wording so much.
I used to have a roomate and we used stay awake till the early hours talking aout life and everything els. And this boughtb ack so many memories.
Thank you.

Hi, I am B, and I am going to write a review....



First off, I want to say that I liked this, it was quite good.



WHAT YOU COULD HAVE WORKED ON:

The "Blue Light" And the top of the poem was not needed, because you already have the title on the top of the page...



Nitpicks per paragraph:

"The soft, ever present glow
shining upon my face.
From the wee hours of the morning
to the quiet hours of the night.
A mournful goodbye given once a day,
for the rest needed to sustain life."

"The light unto my face,
no matter the size.
From a mere few inches
to well over a foot.
Allows one such as me,
to overcome life as a whole."

The light unto my face,
no matter the size.
From a mere few inches
to well over a foot.
Allows one such as me,
to overcome life as a whole.
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Anxiety, depression, self consciousness,
and many, many more.
All forgotten when I'm with you,
losing all their power to control me.
Putting instead laughter, joy, love,
and many, many more in their stead.

Hi there!
This is a very interesting poem. To me, it is actually kind of realistic. To me, this poem is telling about someone who is sitting at a computer or something, getting lost in a virtual reality, and forgetting about the stress of life for a little bit. This is actually very true, and technology is rather addicting. . This poem has some depth to it, and I really like that.

I know it's not much, and I'm sorry.
Keep up the amazing writing!