FireSpyGirl

Hi there! Simple but haunting, well done! The simplicity really brings the fragmented/shadowy feel to life. Odd how memories work, how sometimes the actual pictures fade away but the sound ...

Hi there! It's been awhile since I've reviewed or been on here in general, so this may not be much but I'll do my best! The review before this covered ...

Hi there! Not a ton to comment or say, the other reviews covered things pretty well. So I'm stopping by to say that I love this! The simplicity really helps ...

Hi there! So I get the feeling that this is possibly a spinoff or written by a character in a different story? I'm not active on here that often so ...

Hi @RavenAkuma! It's been a long time since I've done a review, a really long time. There won't be any critiques of any kind, really can't think of any. I ...

Hi there and welcome to YWS! I really hope you enjoy it here. All I really noticed in this story as far as mistakes go was just a few typing ...

Hi there! I really like this story. You kept it simple, without going deep into emotions and in this case I believe that really helps the reader understand the story ...

Hi there! Just popping in to write a review! I hope it'll be helpful. Now I'll jump right in, so here we go! The first two sentences are pretty good, ...

Hi there! First off, I LOVE THIS POEM! It is so true, so accurate, I love it. Secondly, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here. This won't be ...

Hi there! This is a very beautiful poem! I love it. There is one sentence that could use a little editing, and that is this one: " Its heart berried ...

Hi there! So...another great chapter! I really liked it. Kind of a nice break from action and overwhelming confusion. I've got quite a few theories, but I want at least ...

Hi there! Your friend, FireSpyGirl here to review! First off, I like this. Definitely mysterious, and it definitely is horrifying. You definitely leave room for a lot of theories and ...

This is such a cool chapter! I think this is my favorite so far. A diary that locks! I have to say, I've always, always wanted one of those, every ...

Hi there! Okay, I loved this! I am so hooked! So, if you would please tag me when you write the next ones! That being said, I found one sentence ...

Hi there! This definitely put a smile on my face, thank you for that! I believe my favorite part is this: "Hey, everybody, and welcome to youngwritersociety.com! I'm your host, ...