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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: The Sword Sharpener - Chapter 1 (first draft)

    Hi there and welcome to YWS! I really hope you enjoy it here. All I really noticed in this story as far as mistakes go was just a few typing ...

    Nov 12, 2019

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy
    Re: The God of War

    Hi there! I really like this story. You kept it simple, without going deep into emotions and in this case I believe that really helps the reader understand the story ...

    Nov 12, 2019

  • Poetry » Other, Romantic
    Re: Unnamed Daydream

    Hi there! Just popping in to write a review! I hope it'll be helpful. Now I'll jump right in, so here we go! The first two sentences are pretty good, ...

    Oct 5, 2019

  • Poetry » Politics, Realistic
    Re: Peace no longer exists

    Hi there! First off, I LOVE THIS POEM! It is so true, so accurate, I love it. Secondly, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here. This won't be ...

    Jul 16, 2019

  • Poetry » General, Romantic
    Re: The Ocean Of Hearts

    Hi there! This is a very beautiful poem! I love it. There is one sentence that could use a little editing, and that is this one: " Its heart berried ...

    Apr 14, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Kartiel's Curse [Chapter 18.1]

    Hi there! So...another great chapter! I really liked it. Kind of a nice break from action and overwhelming confusion. I've got quite a few theories, but I want at least ...

    Apr 2, 2019

  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: monster

    Hi there! Your friend, FireSpyGirl here to review! First off, I like this. Definitely mysterious, and it definitely is horrifying. You definitely leave room for a lot of theories and ...

    Apr 2, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Kartiel's Curse [Chapter 17.1]

    This is such a cool chapter! I think this is my favorite so far. A diary that locks! I have to say, I've always, always wanted one of those, every ...

    Mar 12, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: The Prophecy Revealed Chp. 1.1 REWRITE

    Hi there! Okay, I loved this! I am so hooked! So, if you would please tag me when you write the next ones! That being said, I found one sentence ...

    Mar 6, 2019

  • Short Story » Humor, General
    Re: I had some coins

    Hi there! This definitely put a smile on my face, thank you for that! I believe my favorite part is this: "Hey, everybody, and welcome to youngwritersociety.com! I'm your host, ...

    Mar 6, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Literature
    Re: Resist or Regret (Ch.3)

    Aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh! I cannot wait for the next chapter!!! This is really good and I am hooked! Please, Please tag me when you write the next one. Now, I have one ...

    Mar 5, 2019

  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Broken glass

    Hi there! This is good! It is well written and well formatted. You did a really good job writing this. I especially love the mystery. "Next to me is the ...

    Mar 5, 2019

  • Other » General, General
    Re: [DELETED]

    Hey, it's me again. I've noticed that you haven't gotten any reviews, so I'll do my best. As I said before, I really like this. This keep getting more and ...

    Mar 5, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic
    Re: CHANGES OF HEART PART 5

    Hi there! So this is good, and interesting. Now, I want to make it clear that I am not trying to be harsh or critical, I really did enjoy this. ...

    Mar 5, 2019

  • Script » Horror, General
    Re: Last Autumn (part)

    Hi there! So this was very interesting, and very, very well written. I like it. Especially the ending, I did not see that coming! XD. The beginning was a little ...

    Mar 2, 2019


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