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FinnWinterfall

  • Poetry » Fantasy, Narrative Re: One with the Stars

    I really enjoyed this poem. It gave me a sense of peacefulness almost greater than I would get from staring at the stars myself. I have only a couple criticism. ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Cut That Laughs

    You're a really talented poet. You took something terrible and made it seem even more terrible by giving it personification. I don't know if this is what you were aiming ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Covered with Dust

    This poem made me happy to say the least. Personally, I enjoy free-verse and I believe the author should be able to organize his/her poem any way they choose. My ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Say Something

    This was a very well-written and realistic poem and something I'm sure a lot of people can relate to. You really captured the sense of hopelessness for yourself and the ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Letters

    Hey there. I really liked this poem, but then again I thought that it was too specific. To make it more general maybe you should leave out you and your ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: Constellation of thoughts

    Wow you're really talented. I really liked this poem. I was especially fascinated with the lines: "The reminiscent of a childhood fear Resurface from the daunting shadow." It shows that ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Rain

    If I were to guess, the message of the poem would have to do with dealing with a loss. I love poems like these because you can make up your ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: I am my own enemy.

    I feel this way all the time but I have never been able to put it into the words. It's a tough life because we think that everyone else around ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: She wears six inch heels.

    It's sad what society has done to its people. We try to be perfect but we never can be perfect so we turn to other alternatives to make ourselves feel ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Daggers, Hammers, and Memories

    This poem was really brilliant as it really connected with me. I loved the short lines as it shows how ugly some people think of themselves. Some people who write ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Short Story » Health, Narrative Re: Panic

    I hope you don't get panic attacks as frequently now. I've never experienced one but there have been times when stress and pain come together to feel overwhelming. I really ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Fly

    I really enjoyed your poem. This is my first review so here goes. My favorite part of the poem was the beginning when you compared an abusive relationship to someone ...

    Mar 14, 2014


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